Reviews for The wrong night,the wrong man.By : ItwasMerlin |
Hey stanakatic head to my pf . My email is there feel free to message. Unable to really reply via reveiw and it'll probably get removed
Thanks Merlin
Hi bud been reading this story for a while and I'm thrilled there's a new chapter and I loved it especially with Sid now taking full ownership of Kate here is some suggestions for future chapters let me know what you think of them please thanks
kate alexis and Sid threesome
castle could be away on a book signing tour and Sid takes this chance to fuck Kate in her married bed at the loft and Sid could tell her stuff like admit it how does it feel to have a real man in this bed and stuff like that and also with this as an extra castle could phone Kate and this leads her and castle to have phone sex and the entire time it's on speaker whatever castle says he would do to Kate and wants her to do to him that is what she and Sid do
one idea is that Sid makes Kate put on her cop uniform from her academy days and he fucks her
kate could be at work in the precinct when she gets a text from Sid that says supply closet now and she and Sid fuck In the supply closet at the precinct
in one chapter later on to show that Sid has won and that Kate's he's now it could be Kate asked Sid to come to her apartment and she initiates it and they fuck
Let me know what you think of these
Really enjoying the story, I hope we'll see a Beckett Alexis threesome!!!
Eagerly awaiting next chapter
Fantastic story. One of the best. Any chance of continuing along the Sid/Beckett line with more Beckett acts
A solid story for a rarely-utilised character of Alexis, especially given the setup from the show with the angel costume! I had given up hope of any continuations so this is a surprise, hopefully there's a few more to come. The initial setup then splitting to the Alexis-blackmail and Beckett indulging in the more wild desires was excellent
It does seem like in this update you've seemingly put Alexis to the side to focus on Beckett, which story-wise makes sense. But it would be a shame if Alexis has been removed entirely from the story - if Sid has sent her away, perhaps after some time she ends up going back to Damien out of need or desire, given he's a loose end? Maybe she visits Jeremy in prison trying to get closure but doesn't realise she's under his influence as well?
Still awaiting update.
Great story. Love the way you write Beckett. I hope you write more soon. This story has a lot of potential.
When I realized that Alexis wasn't going to get banged by a bunch of frat boys and some scrawy ick boy was going to have a taste..... I stopped reading. I guess other people like that she's being violated by a creep. Personally I'd rather see her ravaged by studly frat guys who know how to fuck. So once I saw that creepy boy was gonna get the benefit of the drug I stopped.... don't want to imagine that.
But I guess other people liked it.... so to each his own. None for me thanks.
Any chance of any update? Been a while.
Any chance of some updates?
I like it and can you make one with a beckett cheats with another guy or teen.
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