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Reviews for Divided Loyalties

By : Debby
  • From HollyCP1 on November 18, 2011
    Honestly, I thought Kirk was not well written here. He came off as petulant and whiny, which he never was on the show.And the idea that he would lie to Spock about something like his wife collapsing and possibly miscarrying their child was..doubtful. It was totally outside Kirk's personality. And the idea that people would still be worried about sexuality is a little impossible to swallow. Not to mention the fact that surrogacy is an easy thing to do in our time, let alone with the medical technology in Roddenberry's world. The whole reason Spock is with Chapel doesn't make sense, and the story really fell apart from there. Didn't really make any sense. Sorry.
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  • From ANON - Trekkie on October 22, 2004
    I say that you hadn't had any reviews, and I just got done reading you series. It was wonderfully well written, though I can't say that I'm much of a fan of Spock and Christine's relationship. I rather enjoyed it! I did note that you hadn't posted anything in quite sometime, and hope that perhaps sometime in the future you will post more!
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