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Reviews for A Startling Revelation

By : Nativechild
  • From MegumiMuse on April 02, 2010
    You know, once you read Kronos getting a hold of Duncan and twisting his mind like a pretzel, this isn't all that dark. A little Immortal Suicide, hell, standard ff.net has a fic where Duncan and Methos kill eachother for fun. Your idea was good, need a little work on Dark if you want this to be as dark as your warnings tho. Betas are every writer's friend. Keep working on it!
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  • From vampjannae on September 28, 2007
    At the risk of sounding like a mindless fangirl: OMG!!!!

    I love the possibilities here, and I love that despite knowing the way things worked, Duncan continues to do this time and time again. You captured perfectly his distaste for immortality at the same time as you expressed his love for life. Personally, DuncanXMethos is the ultimate otp for Highlander.

    If you want to discuss continuation ideas, feel free to contact me. YIM: arshei_chan MSN: vampjannae@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Dreamer on August 20, 2006
    Where you go with this is up to you... but if you are looking for ideas, maybe think about researching why some people cut or intentionally hurt themselves. There may be some inspiration there. I'd love to see this fic continued.
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  • From ANON - triana on February 22, 2005
    that was really good. keep it up. u may want to con. with how ducan became imortial and what not.
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  • From ANON - The Last Kitten on March 11, 2004
    This was a great story. I love the fact that you made Duncan the one with the mental problems bec it it's usually Methos. mmmm Methos..... Oh sorry my mind got away from me. I think the story was not only written really well but the plot was awsome too. I think you should have the cause of Duncan's slash fest be because of something really weard or spiritual even. Maybe some kind of early child hood trama. What ever you decide i'm sure it will be groovy and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Sara Blatt on December 17, 2002
    I think this piece is badly in need of a beta reader. There are problems with phrasings and spellings that make me think the author is likely not a native English speaker. In addition, the point of view changes abruptly. In one paragraph, Methos is being spoken of in the third person when abruptly the story switches to first person.

    I'm only suggesting the beta reader because I think the idea has promise. It presents a view of Duncan that I haven't seen before.
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