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Reviews for Independence

By : MrsK
  • From ANON - Padawana2 on January 22, 2006
    Scully/Krycek is an extremely difficult pairing to pull off without entering into non-con territory. Unfortunately, this story fails to meet the challenge. Both Scully and Alex Krycek are EXTREMELY out of character and no explanation is given to why Scully would cross hell and earth to free from prison the man who murdered her sister. The dialogue is cliched and reads like the script from a bad HBO porno. The sex scene also uses horribly cliched terminology and, quite frankly, is too unrealistic to be satisfying (orgasm through nipple stimulation AND penetration? Give me a break!) The story is riddled with irksome grammar and spelling mistakes. However, let's focus on the positive: the author spells "Krycek" right, which is in and of itself an accomplishment in a story of this caliber.

    My suggestions: Re-consider having this story posted; either provide a reason for the encounter or label it appropriately as a vastly OOC PWP. Talk to a beta about correcting the lesser mistakes. There is potential in this author! Best of luck with future writing endeavors.
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