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Reviews for Experiment Brady

By : EveKnight75
  • From ANON - April on March 08, 2014
    Will you ever be continuing this story, or have you given up on it totally?
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  • From Griffinlord on April 16, 2010
    This is amazing, update soon.

    ALL HAIL DARTHDRAGON!
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  • From McKay on March 10, 2008
    This is so weird, I absolutely love it, and your writing is quite good as well. I'm sad to see that it hasn't been updated in so long!
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  • From ANON - zach on November 14, 2007
    WEll, from how long you've been on a hitus, i guess your not writing anymore on it, but so far it's been a great story, and i do how that you write more on it.
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  • From ANON - Fat Man Little Suit on July 13, 2007
    I adored this. It was wonderfully written. Peter and Brady are my favorite and you are giving them the perfect amount attention. And the fact that they have that room and that portrait. Everything is wow. I hope to read more soon.

    I like the growing tension, but I dislike Carol and Mike, especially if they were to interfere, so I hope that it stays simply as a tension. Although actually that wouldn't be the greatest. Whatever. Your writing is beautiful and I want to read more.
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  • From ANON - Diana Lombard on November 16, 2006
    The truth is, I'm not really a Brady Bunch fan though I am familiar with the basics.

    However, I am a huge fan of Martin Mystery, and have read Undercover Honeymoon.

    The main reason I am reading this is because it seems like you intend to explore the social and psychological aspects of stepcest, rather than just the physical. From what I've seen so far, you might do a good job because you're an excellent writer. I also want to see how you tackle the issue of developing a sexual relationship without the use of supernatural elements.

    I like reading Martin Mystery fanfiction. But I also like adult fiction that is written in a mature manner and stimulates the mind instead of focusing solely on the sex/violence/gore.

    Would it help if I watched a few episodes of the Brady Bunch? I'm not sure it would. As it is, I can't really comment on how in-character everyone is or how faithful it is to the show. Sorry about that.

    Maybe I can make up for it in the future by letting you know what I think of the sex scenes (I do like reading good sex scenes), and how well you're developing the plot, moving the events along, and pacing the characters' development.

    I'd like to ask - do you have a soft spot for Peter/Jan? You seem to concentrate more on them, and less on Marcia/Greg, which I've been told is the more popular pairing. As for Mike/Carol, their relationship seems kind of cold. Is this integral to the story, or are you uncomfortable with writing about a sexual relationship between them? Let me know.

    Also, I'd like to be added to your update list for this story.
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  • From ANON - Matt on November 14, 2006
    Excellent story so far. Please continue. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2006
    o.o .........oooooo update
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  • From ANON - Malene on January 19, 2006
    I love the story, please update soon
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  • From ANON - Grace on December 30, 2005
    This is definitly the best Brady Bunch Fan Fiction I have ever read. And I'm serious too, you are such a good writer and the story somehow just works together really well. Please, Please, Please don't stop writing for this, I'm addicted! This is an awesome story. Kudos for you!

    -Grace
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  • From BlueCrow on December 08, 2005
    Great story so far. I like experiments with people on a sexual level. Keep up the good work. Please write more.
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  • From ANON - E on November 18, 2005
    I love the plot so far. My friend and I once had a discussion about if being 'involved' with a stepsibling is incest, so this is cool to see. I really want to know what happens next!
    Please hurry.
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  • From ANON - Wicked Wonder on November 03, 2005
    Whoa, just... whoa. The only people who won't be busy is Carol and Mike! I have a sneaking love for G/M. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - sweetblood on October 25, 2005
    I've read your stories here and on FF.Net. You are an excellent author. Your notes hint at what future chapters shall hold, so you might want to be careful when updating them. Overall, this story is going great so far. Keep it up!

    BTW, I also have to deal with mid-terms in three different languages. We'll get through this, and then you'll continue this story to celebrate the end of the exam period. (I hope!)
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