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Reviews for A Series of Firsts

By : whitemonarch
  • From Danyealle on July 14, 2011
    Interesting story and very well written. Only suggestion I have is that you might want to look into a beta to help with punctuation. There seems to be a few issues with that. Other than that, very well done.
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