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Reviews for Playing Pretend

By : RustyPeach
  • From ANON - shatzen83 on May 30, 2013
    Wow, that's what's called the Stockholm syndrome. I love the smut, but I didn't like the psychological description of the characters. Lana's locked with a small baby in the basement and still clinging so much to Oliver is something beyond my comfort zone, which doesn't help enjoying the fic. Narration from lana's point of view, though she's a little bit out of character, is brilliat, you should stick to it. I didn't like Oliver's perspective, it's not point msking him more vurnaleble throuh words, that kills the mystery of the character.

    I would like to read some more fics written by you based on their "live togehter", but I think it'd be more sexy if she'd less clingy and more afraid and suspicious of him, she's his either way if he arrange marriege and full castody of her and John as her former doctor and husband, it wouldn't be difficult to take her son away and put her back into the asylum if he wanted, would it?

    Looking forward for another fic.
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