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Reviews for The Blackmail of Sarah Walker

By : ItwasMerlin
  • From ninesenshi on September 09, 2015
    Chap 6, very nice, good descriptions. Looking forward to the eventual anal, that will really break Sarah down. I like the direction this is going, just don't become too distracted with other characters.
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  • From ANON - wtf on September 09, 2015
    Chapter was ok, the premise is essentially over, and you make Chuck look completely pathetic, but the sex is solid
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  • From ninesenshi on September 09, 2015
    Read chap 5, quite hot. Could go a bit more into descriptions during sex; how stretched Sarah feels, the hair on Morgan's body (probably a hairy troll), etc. I liked seeing her dominated. Just cuz you write this fic, don't feel you need to defend yourself as a fan of Chuck. This is just a nasty fantasy, feel free to enjoy it. Looking forward to more domination of Sarah.
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  • From ANON - Shane on September 06, 2015
    Don't worry about second guessing yourself Merlin, what you've written so far has been great so don't worry about it. Good to hear the next chapter is almost done.
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  • From MV007 on August 29, 2015
    No worries on the wait. I'm just super excited its continuing. Great story this far. I love reading a sexually humiliated Sarah.
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  • From ANON - Itwasmerlin on August 29, 2015
    My apologies to anyone awaiting the next chapter, I'm about 90% complete but Ive hit a bit of a mental road block. Not to mention I keep second guessing what I'm writing. Good news is I'm now away from work for two whole weeks so I'm hoping to crack on with this asap.

    Sorry for the wait
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2015
    Update soon? :)
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  • From ANON - ID on August 12, 2015
    Hi Merlin,
    Thanks very much...I have a lot of ideas that I could email you if you like. I would suggest you keep your characters true to how you created them, not how they were on the show. The way you have made Morgan he is a pretty nasty guy right now, so it wouldn't be out of character for him to really try to use his power over her...keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - poetryrambling on August 11, 2015
    Next chapter please!!
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  • From ANON - Idragon on August 11, 2015
    Hi Merlin,

    Thanks for your review, I love your story as well and am looking forward to more! Let me know if you ever want to collaborate....I got a few ideas which are very non Charah so would be most likely hated here lol
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  • From ANON - Shane on August 09, 2015
    Just having found and read this story I'm intrigued by where it's going to go and what 'Morgan's Law' is exactly. I imagine some sort of rule about how they'll be fucking or how often... excited for the next chapter though.

    Reading the other reviews as well there's some very hot and interesting places the story can go that people have suggested. Particularly liked the one that suggesting Casey would fuck Sarah. Though I'm not sure how and why Morgan would and arrange this, it'd be a great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2015
    'Confused' says: "Why spend so long building up the blackmail if you don't care about it being believable? That makes no sense."

    Most starting premises are a bit unbelievable like, for example, a guy with a database in his head.
    But your "observation" is one-dimensional and lacks any follow-through of thought.

    Allow me to summarize: Morgan had a written report he used to get a BJ from Sarah. Then he had video of the BJ to acquire another BJ and promises of obedience. Then he got that pledge from her repeated on a recording and then he parlayed all that for sex. Now he has footage of the sex to get... Whatever is next but Sarah is also starting to enjoy being used. What's so confusing?

    Did you think the blackmail would KEEP following that escalation pattern indefinitely? Report-BJ-sex-creampie-anal-threesome-prostitution-BuyMoreGangbang-then what?!

    At what point would THAT have become "unbelievable" to you?

    The motivations HAD to evolve or the acts themselves would have grown more and more extreme to the point that a "still objecting" Sarah would have just bit the bullet and confessed everything to Chuck.

    But if the dirty little girl starts to secretly get off on it...

    I don't think it's very confusing at all. There was a starting premise and it has evolved.

    Or were you just being snarky for the sake of it?
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  • From ANON - Irishdragon on July 28, 2015
    Hey Merlin,

    I like your storyline. It's very difficult when you get reviewers that have an agenda. Some will always be just Chuck/Sarah and I get that, but that is a boring storyline. Sarah had multiple story lines that can be exploited. I think you should keep writing whatever you want to write, trust me people will read it. Just stay true to your vision and your idea, after all what you are doing is giving people a free gift.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 27, 2015
    I just wanted to also add that I love this story. I would also love for Sarah's reluctance to always remain a part of the story. I want her to have moments where she enjoys it but I also love seeing her degraded and humiliated. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Guest on July 27, 2015
    Hey Merlin

    Nice to read that you have not abandoned this story. It's funny and frankly quite embarrassing to see people getting hyper over fictional characters and haranguing you over the plotline when the TV show had huge holes in its story lines. I just want slutty Sarah getting banged by Morgan and loving every bit of it.

    Few ideas..Morgan wants Sarah dressed up as Princess Leia, Morgan owes Lester and Jeff a favor and lets them double team Sarah, Christmas time fuck at Bartowski household. Please make them as smutty as possible.

    Cheers




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