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Reviews for The Blackmail of Sarah Walker

By : ItwasMerlin
  • From ANON - on July 14, 2017

    updateeeeee please


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  • From ANON - Anon on July 07, 2017

    I absolutely love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. I will say it seems a little cruel to end this here. For both the reader and Morgan. For Morgan not to cum is frustrating. Though I guess he's not completely frustrated since he knows what's coming next. I just can't wait for him to pump her ass full of cum or to paint her face again maybe after a little ass to mouth action. Keep up the great work. 


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  • From ANON - Ben on June 17, 2017

    Enjoying this very much. Only wish I could find similar story for Castle or bones heroines (Beckett-Brennan)


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  • From ANON - Reader on June 15, 2017

    Just thought I'd encourage you to keep on going with the story... seems like you are getting a lot of flame for no good reason. Know that there are readers who do enjoy your stories (esp. this one and the castle fic) as they are!


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  • From ANON - Thewolfperler on June 04, 2017

    Chapter felt super short, it was very good though, the dynamic was perhaps the best it has been since the first couple of chapters


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  • From Ride_clyde on June 02, 2017

    This is just one of those stories I love to hate. Hate the pairing, but I love the way that you handle it. As far as the haters go, fuck em. It's easy to tell you what to do when they are too scared to do it themselves.

    Thanks for the update and I can't wait to see the outcome.


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  • From ANON - Anon on June 02, 2017

    nice update. I love this story. Can't wait for the dark and the dirty arcs 


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  • From ANON - styuio2014 on June 02, 2017

    Hey, how are you doing lately? It's finally out! I liked the chapter especially when Sarah unconsciously tried to make Morgan paid attention on her. Out of curious, did you have an ending planned out yet?


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  • From ANON - Test on June 02, 2017

    this last chapter was good. I know you are critical of yourself but I found the writing enjoyable to read.  Obviously this chapter is essentially a teaser for part three given what the name of this segment has been.  Anxiously awaiting part 3 and hope it is out soon.  Even if you don't think it's perfect.  I'm sure it's very good.  


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  • From ANON - AnotherAnon on June 01, 2017

    Welcome back! I wouldn't worry about what people write in reviews. Write the story the way you want, but remember everyone's a critic on fan fiction sites. Constructive criticism is meant to enhance your writing, but reviewers that get angry and argue with you should be ignore. There will always be people that want the story to go a different way than you do, tough. If they are enjoying your story that they are free to stop. I made this mistake when I first started leaving reviews, I had the best of intentions (trying to increase their views) but all I was doing was frustrating the writer. Now if there is a story that I find objectionable I either stop reading it or read but don't inject my objections on the story. Further, unless the author asks ((as you have) I refrain from unsolicited story ideas. Now that that's out of the way, this story is VERY uncomfortable for me, but that's whats great about it! Your writing actually illicits an emotional response! In my case it's usually anger at the troll. At first I hated this idea that Morgan would do this to Chuck, but then I remembered, this is fiction, lol! Now what's really got me hooked his seeing Morgan brought down! I'm sooo glad you plan on posting three different endings, something for everyone, lol! I would LOVE for Casey to catch him and then blackmail Morgan with the un edited tapes that clearly show Morgan's treachery. Also, since this appears to set in late season three or early season four, it would be awesome for the little blackmailing weasel to lose all of the memories of his times with Sarah when he uploads the faulty intersect (he doesn't deserve to keep those memories). Of course Sarah will also forget after Quinn wipes her memories. The only one in the know would be Casey and isn't much of a talker. Anyway, that's all I have! Keep writing we're still out here waiting tomreadvyour stories.


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  • From ANON - Anon on June 01, 2017

    Oh shit, an update. Thank you. I love this story and can't get enough of it. I hope the wait isn't as long next time. I need as much as I can get. Great job and don't worry about the haters. There are far more fans. 


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  • From ANON - wanon2015 on June 01, 2017

    Hey, i liked the part where morgan waits for sarah giving him bj then started eating his sandwich.

    it would be nice for morgan to play with sarah a bit while making a sandwich like a touch or two. and kinda hoping to see morgan cum in her mouth and force her to swallow. but i liked the chapter.

    it's really nice to see for you post another chapter despite it took a long while. it at least gives you more confidence in writing.

    may i ask if u have new chapter for merlin soon?


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  • From ANON - on May 30, 2017

    Can you please update this? or give some hint your atleast working on it even a little. Doesnt matter if it is amazing , apart from a few stories the Chuck section on here is essentially dead . 

    i saw you updated some of your other stories, i do hope this is on the list. Sarah need's to come to terms with the fact she likes it haha, although as long as she always hates Morgan. Gets off on being his sub, but never wanting to see him if you catch my drift. They would be way to oc i think . 


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  • From ANON - on May 12, 2017

    Update yo


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  • From ANON - on January 20, 2017

    update yo, it has been ages


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