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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on August 24, 2015
    I can't tell you how much I loved this. I had to stop several times because I began to tear up. The way the ending was written , it was beautiful. Tom finally has peace and can move on .I especially loved the reading the inscription on Dougs grave. Too loved in life to be forgotten in death. I just wanted to cry. Yes, I know the charactors are fiction, but still, I got attached to them. Mosco in particular. He will always be my favorite. A great end for a great story. Thank you so much for giving me something to look forward to and try harder at what I do. You're the best!
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on August 24, 2015
    It was just great the way the boys handled the Judy situation. They have indeed matured . I'm so happy for them! Finally the boys decided to let the past go and be happy. I'm so happy that Tom went to see Judy and repair their damaged relationship. I think Tom needed that closure as much for him as for Judy. They're good friends and should remain so. It was moving to see Tom open up to her. Even if she wasn't so nice, I understand where Judys coming from. Enough rambling awesome chapter.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on August 16, 2015
    Damn! That was some kinky sex...I like it! I knew Dennis would get his reward for his patience. I'm glad Tom is finally getting over his fear. Dennis is just what he needed. After all they've been through. That first scene was so hot I though about turning down the air condioner. I'm glad Harry forgave Tom, he's too good a person to be angry. So Dennis and Judy might be talking and Dennis won't tell Tom ? Hmmm. I wonder if Tom will see her. Great chapter, I loved it.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on August 11, 2015
    Just list this as another well written chapter.This one was especially great because it shows Dennis ,yet again thinking of Tom first rather than himself. When Tom told Dennis that he wanted him to make love to him, Dennis could have easily just thought of his own pleasure, but he saw how he panicked.Instead Dennis shows Tom love and understanding. *Crying* Dennis is indead grownig up. I'm so proud of him! That's real love when you think of others instead of yourself. Dennis does love Tom. Enough of my rambling. More thumbs way up!

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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on August 06, 2015
    Your stories are like candy, I just gotta have my fix. Anyway this chapter is awesome. I like the way you have the interaction between Dr. Li and Tom. Very insightful. After he had his attack and freaked out, I thought Dennis was going to get angry, but he handled the situation like a pro. He is maturing and thars good for him and Tom. D. Li seems like a caring person, hopfully he can help Tom and Dennis. What he said about rape is sad but true. It usually is about power over people. Until next chapter.xx
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on August 03, 2015
    Another great chapter! Dennis is showing some real maturity in going to see Dr. Li. The interaction between them was insightful. Dennis clearly didn't want to be there, but it showed how much he loves Tom. Speaking of him, what a way to spend a birthday! It was sweet and sexy. Although Tom is troubled . Thanks for yet another wonderful chapter.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on July 27, 2015
    Just another well written chapter I must say. Finally Tom and Dennis have a good heart to heart and talk things out. Dennis is cleary more concerned about Toms emotional wellfare. He's trying to help Tom along while at the same time exposing his vulerabilities. It takes a strong person to do that. If he haves patience it will be rewarded. I'm sure when he's better Tom will give him that "reward." It will be that much sweeter without Toms demons in the way. Again great chapter. Always looking forward to reading this story. Its like candy , I always want more.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on July 21, 2015
    This is an awesome chapter! I absolutetly loved it! I felt so bad for Tommy, here he was trying to do something special for Dennis and he ruined it. That Dennis and his heard head! My favorite part is Tommys journal. It was perfect the way his feelings were writtened down, I just had to stop every few lines to reread it. Very insightful. It was eerie how he would see Amy ,Doug, and Mosco. ( My personal fav.charactor, by the way)Funny how the 'I'm with chico'shirt was. Poor Tommy even wrote his achievements, too bad Dennis missed them . Thanks to his foolishness. Baad Dennis! Sorry for ranting. Great chapter hope to see more!
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on July 15, 2015
    Nice to see Tom getting better. I felt bad for him in that shower scene. He needs help , but looks like he's scared to get it. A fly fishing trip sounds like a good idea to start on a new trip. Maybe it'll take his mind off of his problems ,at least for a while. In the mean time glad to see that Dennis did the right thing and not listen to his hormones. That would have been bad.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on July 15, 2015
    So Toms getting the help he needs. I'm so happy. Dennis was a true friend being there with him. I hope the neurologist can help Tom . He deserves to be healed. And I hope the damage isn't permanent. All in all some more of your excellent work. Now going off to the next chapter. Can't wait to see what you have.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on July 09, 2015
    Gotta have my daily dose of Dennis and Tom. This time I think I overdosed on it. I don't care. Its just too good!
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on July 09, 2015
    Yikes! Booker sure was mad. He didn't handle that little piece of news well about Mcleod.At least he had a chance to cool off. I didn't know the extent of Toms injuries. Wow. They did a number on him. Poor Tom. I hope they can move forward and Tom can heal from his ordeal. All in all another awesome chapter. My sister in laws cat seems to like your story too. He gave it two paws up!
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on July 06, 2015
    Dennis to the rescue! Toms hero. Another awesome chapter well done. Poor Tom, I'm sure he didn't want that job anyways. Finally Dennis is thinking with his head. What have we here another mystery charactor? Ohhh, I wonder if this McLoed will be a threat. Hope not.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on July 01, 2015
    I just had to review again. Poor Tom. Dennis has his work cut out for him.I love how your story comes alive. Its like I'm feeling what they're feeling. A mark of a true story teller.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on July 01, 2015
    I love it! Dennis on a caffine high is somthing else.
    I've done that before . Boy was that a cool tine. They had to pry me off the wall. Anyway, Dennis is what Tom needs . I think he can give him all the TLC he needs.
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