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Reviews for Chasing a Butterfly

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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 30, 2015
    Another excellent chapter.
    Poor Tom, he seems so...broken. It looks like he gave up and not fight for himself.
    Dennis must be so heartbroken seeing him like that. He proved how much of a man he is by telling Tom about Mosco. It took a lot of fortitude. I commend him. He is truly a good man. If any one can help Tom it is Dennis. Let's face it they belong together and make a damn good couple. Like I said awesome chapter,and can't wait for the next.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 16, 2015
    Wow, I think this is some of your best work. Whatever happen to Tommy must have been pretty bad. Hoping he'll recover. The fates throw them together, yes,but its only because they were ment for each other. Wishing you the best. Thumbs up on this latest chapter.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 11, 2015
    I didn't like this at all...I love it! Yet another great chapter.Ana didn't waste any time. A tire iron? Yikes! Poor Tom,but at least Mosco did the right thing. It proves that he did love Tom. I was saddened by hs death. I was starting to like him.If only he knew Tom survived his ordeal. Mosco will be missed. That last part was also sad. Poor Dennis.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on June 06, 2015
    Holy shit! This just got even better!First Tom gets released and he says bye to Mosco. A somewhat tender moment. I'm going crazy trying to figure out what Moscos plans are for Tom. Ahh! Whatever it is ,it doesn't sound good. Mosco seems to have loyalty to this mysterious jefa. Then there's the arrival of Ana, Juans wife.Yikes!! Could this be part of the plan that Mosco initiated? I'm just going bonkers trying to find out. Can't wait for the next chapter. Im looking forward to it.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on May 31, 2015
    Well worth the wait! I'm liking the new Mosco, but can't help thinking what his plans are for Tom . This chapter really grabbed my attention. Especially when Manning appeared in Toms cell block. I kept thinking he was going to rape Tom, but I was surprised when Mosco killed him. What a twist! I just loved it! Tom showed courage testifying against Manning, so brave! And what a way to spend a b- day. Very hot! Until next time.
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on May 15, 2015
    Yet another awesome chapter. Tom told Dennis what
    he needed to say. I know Dennis feels hurt , but he's not looking at it from Toms point of view. Booker is being pig- headed. Booker who? Ouch!
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  • From ANON - vidalhbea on May 13, 2015
    Oh my goodness! I can't believe ,it Tom and Mosco? Hmmm.Poor poor DenniS. I think he's in for a rude awakening. You were right about not liking the way things turned out, but I trust you and I'm sure you have something good planned. Can't wait to see what it is. All in all another great chapter.
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  • From vidalhbea on May 04, 2015
    Things look like they're falling apart for both Tom and Dennis. As sad as it is ,maybe that's what they need so they can move on. Like I said I don't know where this is going, but I'm looking forward to seeing how this pans out. I feel bad for both,but more for poor Tom. I hope Harry can help. As always great chapter and looking forward to the next.
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  • From vidalhbea on April 29, 2015
    I was not expecting that. I love it! Don't know where you're going with this,but I can't wait to see. Until next time.
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  • From vidalhbea on April 27, 2015
    I loved it. The way this chapter was written and Toms reactions. I liked the way you wrote it ,the reader can know how and why Tom acts the way he did. Another great chapter.
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  • From vidalhbea on April 15, 2015
    Oh my god! This is a master piece. You my friend outdid yourself! I loved it! Poor Tom looks like he's going to suffer for his actions. Can't blame Dennis for how he feels.
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  • From vidalhbea on April 13, 2015
    This is getting so good! I can't wait to find out what el jefe's reaction will be.Tom might be overconfident in thinking he' ll be okay. Who knows if he will be.
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  • From vidalhbea on April 09, 2015
    Oh my god what did Tom do?Whats wrong with Denniss mother? A great chapter to your story. Loved it!
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  • From vidalhbea on April 05, 2015
    Your use of spanish is great . I'm so hooked on this and thank you for writting such a great story. I hope you continue with such wonderful stories.
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  • From vidalhbea on April 05, 2015
    Poor Tom and poor Dennis.So sad it had to happen that way. I'm loving the the way it's written, Dennis feels betrayed ,but Tom obvously wants to do the right thing so he can go on with his life.Yes another wonderful chapter. Of course you knew that.
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