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By : MoreCharahPlease
  • From ANON - Katie B on July 21, 2015
    Just read this story from start to finish and i must say a confident Chuck is a sexy Chuck. The sex whilst hot is tastefully written and it seems they like each other a lot. But Sarah you need to sort your feelings out girl cause you will end up losing him i think if you don't. Lovely story so far, Cant wait to read more.
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  • From KnightRider on July 20, 2015
    Loved the new chapter, and love this story. Hopefully we won't have to wait as long for the next update but I understand life happens. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Sleepygirl78 on July 20, 2015
    I haven't even read the new chapter yet, but I'm so happy you updated this story I couldn't wait to review! It's gonna be a nice evening reading the story from the beginning all over again. Thanks you!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2015
    Really enjoying your story! Thank you!
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  • From Mufc87 on July 20, 2015
    Another great chapter. Sex was hot as usual. Thanks for the update
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2015
    love the chapter, Sarah seems to be a pretty selfish lover but it's extremely well written.

    A little weird for her to be thinking about bryce/past boyfriends whilst with Chuck too, dunno maybe just me

    Thanks for the update!
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  • From Mufc87 on July 12, 2015
    Love to see an update soon. So eager to see where you go with this.
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  • From ANON - VSC on July 07, 2015
    One of the things I find so interesting about this story is how you’ve allowed Sarah and Carina to be something that so many women deride men for doing. You’ve allowed them to be female versions of fuckboys – players, lacking in emotion and motivation for commitment, focused primarily on no-strings sexual self-gratification.

    This fits a part of Sarah’s character who is afraid of emotion and commitment and has some issues with men. Sure, in many ways this is also not Sarah, but Carina has convinced her she can be a taker and satisfy her needs devoid of any emotion beyond lust.

    In this story so far, Sarah is taking from Chuck more than she is giving. And that’s OK. Women should be able to do that too. As long as the other person is willing we should be able to take what we want. Only if they're willing.

    It is an unfortunate truth that many women deny this occurs and climb onto a moral pedestal when confronted with it. When the reality is that what is happening here is actually very prevalent in modern society. Men don’t hold a monopoly on this sort of behavior, not even close.

    The next time you are in a bar, pay close attention to the women. You’ll see them eyeing the perceived trophy males just as much, assessing the potential, passing judgement. It’s an undeniable fact of modern society and the human condition. Women are primarily the ones making the choice.

    I’m not saying there is anything really wrong with this either; on either side of the fence we tend to build between the sexes. Sex shouldn’t be a dirty word or a forbidden act in the absence of love. People shouldn’t feel inhibited to explore that side of themselves if the desire, trust, and attraction are there.

    Society constantly tries to deny it, but sometimes great things come from it. Friendship. Love. Commitment. Born from what may have intended to be a one-night stand… or an unspoken ‘fuck buddy’ arrangement.

    Unfortunately, in this case Sarah is attempting to make her and Chuck’s arrangement spoken and contractual. She’s set it out for him to see. Chuck may be going along with it right now, but that’s not really Chuck. If Chuck is true to character, it should be bothering him to be held at arm’s length this way.

    I have a strong feeling that Sarah is denying something by making Chuck her fuck buddy like this; something that could be making what Chuck and her are doing much more special – her emotions. By sticking to her fuck buddy guns and saying her intentions out loud she might be causing serious harm to their budding trust and damaging their potential relationship – total trust that needs to be present for really mind-bowing sex.

    Because trying to stifle her emotions is preventing Sarah from giving as strongly as she takes. And if I were Chuck, I’d be wondering about the potential personal fallout I’d incur from my fuckgirl finally getting bored and moving on.

    Can something greater come from this situation? It can. It is, after all, Chuck and Sarah.

    They can both try to accept and deny all they want, put the wild sex in a bubble. But sooner or later, if these two are true to character, they are going to come crashing together in a deeper way. And then the wild sex will become even wilder when they both feel like they can completely let go.

    So, kudos to the author for admitting an undeniable truth and delving into it through their story. I'm curious where it will lead.

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  • From KnightRider on July 06, 2015
    Hoping for an update so one. I love this story!
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  • From sjones5 on July 06, 2015
    would love to see an update soon.
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  • From sjones5 on June 29, 2015
    lots of hot sex so far, but i think it could still be a bit kinkier. not sure what happened to sarah, in the first 2 chapters she seems to have fallen head over heels for chuck, in and out or the bedroom. but after that she pretends like she doesnt feel anything. thats ok shes just deluding herself with that, but maybe you shouldnt have wrote her feelings so strong in the first couple of chapters. not surprised chuck was a bit confused by her fuck buddy request, cause it seemed at first like there was a possibility of a relationship there by the way she was acting. like the idea of her maybe seeing chuck with another woman, but i especially like the idea of the carina sarah conversation that somebody mentioned, where carina fucks chuck and brags about how good he was and sarah getting jealous, that could work good in this plot i think. also what does chuck do for a job? hope he doesnt work at the buymore in this story.
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  • From Mufc87 on June 27, 2015
    Reading through this again, I can definitely see a scene in the future where Sarah and carina are talking, and carina telling Sarah about the latest guy she fucked one night called chuck. Saying how great he was in bed and how she has to have another go of him. Sarah realising it can't be a coincidence starts sorting out her feelings for him before it's too late, and she's insanely jealous. Maybe she fucks someone else, and realises that the reason the whole fuck buddy thing was working out, wasn't only due to the great sex but because of chuck and her feelings. There is nowhere near enough stories where it's Sarah chasing chuck and pushing for a relationship, it's usually always chuck doing the chasing. I thought in season 3 Sarah should of been doing the chasing, especially after the lack of trust of chucks character and the whole red test situation. Can't wait for the next update
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  • From KnightRider on June 25, 2015
    Loved the update. Glad you had Chuck agree to the arrangement. I'm curious to see who develops the feelings first. Or rather who wants to act on the feelings that are clearly already there for both of them. Like I said before I'm hoping you have Sarah wanting to start an actual relationship, but she has to convince Chuck because he is being cautious so he doesn't get hurt. There aren't enough stories where Sarah needs to chase Chuck, which is what I thought should have happened in season three because with the stuff Chuck had to put up with I think it would have been more believable if Sarah had to win him back.

    But anyway that is my hope for this story. There aren't many adult chuck stories where I'm invested in the plot because there usually isn't one, but I like how this story has a plot, and a believable one at that. I can see versions of Chuck and Sarah in different jobs where this happens.

    Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - sleepygirl78 on June 21, 2015
    Really glad you updated this story! I was afraid you had dropped it, it would have been a shame. As always, the writing is great. Keep up the good work (= pretty please, update soon!)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 20, 2015
    just waiting for it to all fall apart again properly, and boy do I hope it is Sarah that realizes she wants more
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