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  • From ANON - on July 28, 2016

    Awesome as usual. And as usual I look forward too more.mufc87


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  • From ANON - on July 28, 2016

    Where did you go? We miss you!

    Come back please? This story is so phenomenal. Please keep writing it, in spite of the lack of support you're getting. I'm sure there are still a lot of readers here!


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  • From ANON - on July 08, 2016
    Happy to see a new chapter! Finally Chuck and Carina meet. I love how intense Chuck and Sarah's love making is!!! Thank You
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  • From Ride_clyde on July 08, 2016

    Awesome chapter! I love this story and the way you write it. Well done!


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  • From ANON - on July 07, 2016

    This continues to be the best story on here. I love this. so much. And I love the sex. It's so hot and a total turn on. I love seeing Chuck take control, and I love Sarah loving it. I wouldn't mind if they wrestled for control a little as the story continues. That'd be fun to read. Great work.


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  • From ANON - on July 07, 2016

    loved the carina/chuck interaction


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  • From ANON - on July 07, 2016

    Awesome as usual. Laughed pretty hard at carinas antics when she met chuck. Like how chuck wanted Sarah to scream his name. Little things like that, that you add in keep the sex new and hot. I look forward to more of this great story. Mufc87


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  • From ANON - on July 06, 2016

    Looking forward to the next update 


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  • From ANON - on July 03, 2016
    Hope everything is going well. Look forward to a new chapter!
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  • From ANON - on June 29, 2016
    Just came across this story and I really love it!. I hope you'll continue writting! 
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  • From ANON - on June 27, 2016
    Hi I hope you post soon. I miss this story. Thanks!
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  • From Tito on June 26, 2016
    Update plsTnx
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  • From ANON - jimmy gap on June 16, 2016
    So I went back and looked at other reviews out of curiosity after I marathon'd this whole story. Which is such a wickedly good story with lots of heart and also a good amount of splendidly written smut. And now I'm half laughing, half annoyed. Especially after Chuck told Sarah he was a hacker, the way so many people were furious about how Sarah sex'd it out of him. I just had to laugh. Because apparently the stories on this site where Sarah is getting raped by arms dealers to save Chuck's life are totally fine. But what Sarah did here to get Chuck to admit the truth was just so awful. So terrible. What a betrayal that was.

    And then as the story continued, those same reviewers came back to tell you why you wrote what you wrote. Like you changed things to please them. What kind of megalomaniac misogynistic bullcrap is that! Wow. Frankly, MCP, I think you're better off with those people not reading. The thing I notice the most when I read fic, especially on this site in particular, is that some readers think they have the right to tell an author what to write, sometimes in really patronizing ways. They think they can control the story how they want it to be. I see a lot of that in the hundreds of reviews you've gotten for this story.

    I won't tell you how to write or what to write.

    I will say that I really love what you've already written. And I see you haven't updated in awhile. I hope all the negativity didn't make you stop. But if it did, what you gave us has been really fantastic stuff. Thanks so much. Don't let the haters get you down.
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  • From ANON - JoeBob on June 13, 2016
    Great as usual. What's wrong with a story about two people falling in love who happen to have hot sex? I get that it's not the usual story here. But maybe it should be. I love the romance part just as much as the hot sex.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 07, 2016
    Casey is a cock block. Oh well. I love that chuck and sarah are still going. Thank you for the new chapter!!!!!!
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