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Reviews for Beneath a Heart of Darkness

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  • From HalfrekDemon on August 03, 2016

    This just gets better and better. Booker actually bargained Tom's body? Wow! I really wasn't expecting that!


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  • From ANON - Anon on June 09, 2016
    Wow! The last two chapters were intense! Just when I thought Tom and Dennis would start their relationship, you throw a spanner in the works! Haha! I love a twist. Well done, you're keeping me guessing.
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on June 07, 2016
    Oh my ,such a steamy chapter! What's going on with my favorite officer ? Dennis seems confused about his situation . Not that he can be blamed because of what Holland is putting him through . Please don't let him lose himself to Holland , he's too good for that . As for him falling for Jorge , YIKES ! Then all he's doing for Tom will be for nothing . We'll not true. Dennis could get Jorge out and help him . I just love these twists you put . I know the next chapter will be just as awesome . Huggles !
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on June 07, 2016
    I must say this is getting good! I say bring Ingram down the hard way . Anyway great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on April 13, 2016
    Another great chapter . Poor Dennis . Go go Dennis ! I hope he gets Jorge out .
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on April 13, 2016
    Wow this is just...wow . Just when I think when you can't get better,you get better . The characters come to life. I'm also noticing Jorge. He seems to speak volumes,even when he's silent . I hope Dennis can help him . I think I'm growing attached to Jorge . As for Holland ,well you know . No mercy for him . Dennis sure haves his hands full. Anywho great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 30, 2016
    Nooo! What about Tommy? Dennis hates him now???? I can't bear it... ahhh, this is sooo good :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 16, 2016
    I can't express how much I hate Holland. I hope that mother*&#@er gets what's coming to him.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 08, 2016
    OMG! This chapter was just brilliant, brutal but brilliant! I hate Holland too, he is an evil S.O.B.! Poor Dennis, what's going to happen now? GAH! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on March 02, 2016
    Oh , somebody's getting in way over their head. Holland is turning out to be not my favorite person . Somehow I knew he was going to do something like that . Using Dennis's guilt against him . Not that I blame him . Now poor Dennis just went straight to the frying pan . Holland has proven to be quite the pain in Dennis's ass--literally . Like I say each chapter just keeps getting better . You still got girl ! Much Huggles !
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on February 22, 2016
    It must be so horrible for poor Dennis to be degrading himself like that . I don't know this Holland , but I know he needs his comeuppance . As for Tom , he's brave to want to go back to the chapel . Clearly he's not ready . Sadly the rape gas affected him more than he thought . It was sad for him to be looking for Booker ,but not being able to find him . That scene with Penhal made me feel bad for him , he was , in his own way trying to help Tom . Great chapter by the way .
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 19, 2016
    Fantastic chapter! Poor Dennis, he really has walked into a hornet's nest. His love for Tom knows no bounds, and he is willing to sacrifice EVERYTHING to make him happy. It breaks my heart, but I can't wait to see what happens next. You rock these stories! :D
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on February 18, 2016
    Yikes ! Looks like Booker bit off more than he could chew . This Holland fellow seems to have him where he wants him . Poor Booker , I hope it's worth it . Then again that's true love that he's showing for Hanson . As a famous singer once said "I knew you were trouble ". Great chapter , and this just keeps getting better . ;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 10, 2016
    Slavery for love! Brilliant :D I really like where this is going, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on February 10, 2016
    Just when I think it couldn't get any better ,you prove me wrong and this gets better. I love the way Ingram was introduced. Poor Dennis didn't know what hit him . As soon as Ingram said he was enjoying his mojito whilst looking at Jorge , I knew Dennis was going to get screwed . I just didn't think it was going to be literally . Gulp . Poor Dennis , baaad Ingram . I hope Booker knows what he's doing . He's doing it for Tom , I know , but it still sucks . I'm sure Dennis is smart enough to handle himself . So as I said this chapter rocks ! It's going to intresting to see how this pans out .
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