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Reviews for Beneath a Heart of Darkness

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  • From ANON - Anon on February 07, 2016
    Sorry to hear about your mum. My condolences.

    I love this fic, you have the characters down pat. I hope you continue with it.
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on February 03, 2016
    Once again another chapter well done . Glad to see Harold back . He's the man ! ; ) Hope whatever Booker us planning works .
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  • From ANON - Alex Turner on December 18, 2015
    Just loving this story and so happy someone is still writing good 21 Jump Street fiction. Good timing as binge watched the series last week and wanted to find some stories that went in the direction my imagination was writing sequels. Now I am binge reading. Love how you've written the characters and hope you do keep updating as this is great. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on December 14, 2015
    Another chapter well done . Tom lashing out probably helped him . It looks like he's reacting to what happened to him . I truly hope all his attackers get what's coming to them . Have Dennis arrest them . Speaking of Dennis , he proved how level headed he can be . He was calm and collected during Tom's verbal attack . When he told him how Dennis wanted to get into his pants, and that he was just mad because it wasn't him having sex --I thought for sure that Dennis would retaliate . He did a great job diffusing Tom's anger . Again great job on the chapter . Huggles !
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on December 11, 2015
    Tom is an emotional mess . Well after what happened , who could blame him ? He seems pensive . Poor Tom , he's so distraught , he can't stand to touch himself to take a shower . I guess every reaction is different with rape victims . I'm glad Dennis showed up .I was expecting for Tom to throw him out , but was pleasantly surprised when he let him stay. Booker reacted quickly when Tom told him how he felt . Typical Dennis , but I'm glad to see that he used his common sense . I must say I was shocked that Tom had asked him to stay. Hmm he's cooking something up . Wonder what could it be ? I can't wait to find out . And if course ---great chapter .
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on December 09, 2015
    Seems like Tom is hanging by a thread . This chapter gives the reader a tiny look into poor Hanson's mind , and it's not pretty . I hope he gets the help (Booker) he needs . Alas I feel for Doug . He came in with the chocolates and flowers , it was nice of him . At least we know what happened to Dennis . He stuck to his guns for Tom. I think that shows true character . Not boring at all . Thumbs up .
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on December 05, 2015
    I'm listening to one of my favorite bands -Def Leopard's -pour some sugar on me ,and reading this latest chapter . All I can say is damm! Dennis is really in a bind . Stuck between duty and his loyalty to Tom . I don't envy him . I must say , I was surprised when Penhal just up and punched him .Dennis not doing anything was probably the best thing he could've done . All his going on and Tom seems to have lost his fight . I hope Dennis can bring it back . And that Doogie Houser refence ,I loved that show , used to watch it all the time . So another great chapter .
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on November 30, 2015
    It shows how much Dennis cares for Tom when he's willing to lie and trick him to get help . Of course it's so heartbreaking to see how bad it is . Dennis may have felt like a bad person , but he needed to deceive Tom in order to help him . Hanson being so traumatized , he wasn't in his right mind . The e m t witness a rare sight when they saw Dennis comfort Tom . This chapter was poignant and I just love how far Dennis was willing to go for Tom . It showed how much he cares . Thumbs up . And already waiting for the next chapter .
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on November 24, 2015
    I'm giving this baby two reviews ! Two reviews and two thumbs up . I think Harold should bring SEXY back . Yeah . That's the kind of stuff that keeps me coming back . Huggles ! !
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on November 24, 2015
    Have I said how much this is like a drug to me ? Clearly this chapter is so good , it had me going stupid . And I love it! Harold is the man of the hour . When I think of him , I think of the song "I need a hero . " HE IS QUICKLY BECOMING MY FAVORITE . I like that he decided to stand up for himself , even up to Booker . Wow ,Mr.Horshack grew a pair , and what pair. The interaction between the three of them is heartfelt . Dennis struggling with Tom shows a new side to him . A vindictive side I'm not sure what to think of . But I understand the need to want to help Hanson . I'm not sure if he should trick Tom into going to the hospital , then again he knows what he's doing . Until next time ,can't wait for my fix , xx.
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on November 22, 2015
    Poor Tom . I can't imagine how he feels . I devoured ... I mean read this and my heart went out to not only Tom ,but Dennis . Booker must have felt so helpless ,not only that but , to have his friend respond to him like that . I don't think no one can blame Hanson for reacting like that . Sadly in a way he did participate , but unwilling . The ending was a welcome surprise for me . I knew Harold had it in him ! My hero . I hope he sticks around . So great chapter , well done ,bea.xx.
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on November 08, 2015
    ...damn ! I didn't like this one bit . ...I loved it ! I thought it was great . It conveyed so much emotion ,that I could tell how hard you worked on it . Poor Dennis trying to help Tom , but not being able to must have torn him apart . Surely it wasn't easy seeing the man he loves hurt in such a brutal way . I wonder if Dennis will be able to help Tom get through that traumatic event . Still having Tom in handcuffs is hot ,or would be under different circumstances . In other words BaHoD is my drug . I can't wait for my next fix . Huggles , bea.
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on November 02, 2015
    Wow. This chapter ,much like a fine wine was well worth the wait ,and like a fine wine deserved to to be savored . Just when it looked like Dennis and Tom were getting along bam ! That scene with the handcuffs ,oh mama ! A fan girls dream come true . Too bad that it was under duress . Still hot though . And that McCarter...oooh , I hope he gets it in the end . Great chapter , eagerly waiting for the next . Huggles ,bea. ;)
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on October 26, 2015
    This is a treat to read . Tom sure did mess up . I can tell his heart is in the right place . He's just too compassionate for his own good . Dennis looks like he had to slap dome sense into Hanson . Those two have so much sexual tension , that even the birds in the story felt it . Tom may be confused , but I think he's falling for Dennis . Who can blame him ? So yes ,another well-written chapter. I loved the depth of emotions the two displayed . I'm glad Tom was honest when he talked to Booker . Until next ! Xx
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on October 21, 2015
    Oh , oh ,the plot sickens ! Tom and Dennis look like they are gonna be in a lot of trouble . Yikes ! I can wait to see what happens . Before I forget , wow Tom likes to fight in the nude ? Hmmm. I bet Dennis likes that . What a way for him it wake up . Lol. Or maybe Tom is a streaker and he didn't know it . Anyway I'm very interested in this Horshack fellow , he looks like he could be easy pickings . Poor guy. Great job on this chapter.
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