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By : MoreCharahPlease
  • From MV007 on April 10, 2016
    Your stories are a little different from the one I've started but I completely understand where you're coming from in terms of motivation. I started writing because I wanted to write sex scenes with these characters. Whether other people enjoy it or not I can't predict but I enjoyed writing it for myself. And to be honest, you have far more fans than detractors so please don't get too down from the negative critiques. Finally, I just want to encourage you to keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Knorred on April 10, 2016
    This was good. Very hot! But all your stories are at first. It's only later on that it kinda seems like you run out of material/ideas and I feel like I'm reading the same thing over and over. I stopped reading Just a Game around chapter 10-12 for this reason, not because of any drop in quality. And from looking at the reviews, then going back and glancing over some of the chapters, I think I'm glad I did because it looks like you made some seriously questionable plot decisions.

    Which is okay. This is how you learn what works and what doesn't. I think you're at your best in pieces like this one. Short stories filled with mostly sex and no over-arcing plot. My advice is to just keep writing, even through all the bad reviews. You're only comfortable with writing certain sex acts, which definitely contributes to that limiting of ideas I talked about. But there's time to expand and grow and refine your craft, and the best way to do that is to, like I said, just keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 09, 2016
    Fuck the haters. There are people who love it. Keep writing
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  • From ANON - Earnie on April 09, 2016
    Another great story MCP hope you will continue this one and just a game don't let the negative reviews get you down you are proving Chara can be hot keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 09, 2016
    Awesome! thank you for that and I hope we read more from this Storyline. I hope to see you soon with another chapter to Just a Game. F' Those bad reviews. I enjoy all your work. I would have attacked chuck like that to!
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  • From Agravain on April 09, 2016
    Glorious as always MCP! I look forward to every story and chapter you post. And if you want to write other stuff, you do it - you don't owe us shit!
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  • From ANON - Mufc87 on April 09, 2016
    Awesome idea for a story. Loved this chapter. I hope you continue this, as there is potential for a lot of hot adrenaline fuelled kinky sex here. Hopefully you update this, if not it was still enjoyable.
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