Reviews for Cries of a Shadow

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  • From vidalhbea on August 17, 2017

    Ohhh my curiosity is piqued  ! This is getting very interesting, . Wiil doesn't want Tom around anyone ? Interesting . This needs close attention  . As for Tom showing up to meet with Dennis,  I thought for sure he wouldn't show . It took me by surprise to see Tom react to Dennis  wanting to know if he was okay.  Wow . And then he seems to have self-esteem issues.  Hmmm wonder what's going on . So yeah can't wait to see what happens next  ! Thumbs up  :)



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  • From vidalhbea on August 09, 2017

    I'm loving it so far . The part where Doug and Dennis are talking is especially funny .  I didn't  think Doug  would notice  Dennis looking at Tom and call him out on it . Then when Tom came over and Doug was about to say anything  , Dennis  interrupts him . Lol . PenHal had Dennis  squirming there . Most interesting  is Wills introduction  . For some reason I don't  think I like him . Somethings fishy  going  . And the cliffhanger  ! Ahhh ! Poor Tom.  



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  • From vidalhbea on August 03, 2017

    Ohhh  ! The first chapter  and I'm already intrigued  . I can tell this is gonna be good  ! What really got my  attention was the way Harry and Doug  are portrayed  . It's out of character  for them . But it works . It's interesting  . As for Tom  , you have me wondering what has happened  to make him act this way . I'm now eagerly awaiting  the next chapter  .  :)   

    Thumbs up  ! 



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