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Reviews for Tarzan Teaches Jane

By : UNIVERSALSEEKER
  • From ANON - Keneisha on December 31, 2014
    This is my favorite story on this site!
    I love it,oh my gosh I hope Nicki doesn't try something stupid. Jane would be crushed, and it'll hurt their baby.:(
    Please update soon!
    I'm looking forward to it.
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  • From ANON - Athy on August 30, 2006
    This is a grate story! hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - ms lafferty on June 10, 2005
    i love this story so much that i am gong to have to beg you to keep going i mean it please please keep going.The story is wonderfull
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  • From ANON - Taffy on March 17, 2005
    Universalseeker,
    You have to write more!
    You can't stop there!
    Oh my God..this story is so great!
    What is Richard up to?
    They've got to tell Nikki about the BABY!
    Nikki will love her new room.
    There's sooooooooo much for you to write!

    I'm so glad you (almost) posted this on Tarzan the series.
    I never would have found it otherwise!
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  • From ANON - LinTex on August 21, 2004
    More PLEASE!!!!!! This is one of the best fics I have come across in a while.
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  • From ANON - Av_ptb on March 06, 2004
    Like i said before you are agreat writer just remember john has no clue what some things are he spent 18 years in the jungle but other than that i love it and keep writing
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  • From ANON - my comment on March 03, 2004

    PLEASE!!! use a dictionary, there are many free online ones. or use the spell check feature on the computer, also have someone proof read your story andnt ont out the errors they find before posting online.
    This will make the story more readable and enjoyable to your readers.

    Some errors I caughre. re.

    using the word Write instead of Right
    using the word Waste as in garbage, instead you need to use Waist as in an area of the body
    using the word To instead of Too as in I ate too much
    using the word Where as in Where are we going to? Use the word We're which is a contraction for We Are

    Just pointing out some spelling mistakes.

    here are some dictionary links to use
    http://www.m-w.com/dictionary.htm
    Dictionary.com
    www.yourdictionary.com
    http://dictionary.cambridge.org/
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  • From ANON - lolita on February 25, 2004
    I think that this is actually a very good story, very specific and very vivid which is good, please write more as soon as you can. ;)
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