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Reviews for What You Wish For

By : Hannah7876
  • From ANON - Jude Reverie on May 18, 2016
    You've got it right for stating what you have here is a nasty piece of work. You have every right to tell a story, but you have no right to assassinate our beloved TV series show's characters. I do feel sorry for you that you can never write a plausible Lady Heather and Grissom story without dismantling Grissom's character to pieces. Have you ever thought of it if this Grissom would be the man for your Lady Heather? If the answer is yes, then, you shouldn't wrap your nasty characters as LH and Grissom. The LH, Grissom and Sara that I have came to know are nothing like the ones coming out of your poisonous keyboard.

    I am sorry but I can't think of anything to describe this nasty piece of work other than 'disgusting'.
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  • From Giwu1412 on March 18, 2007
    I know a lot of people don't review stories on here, but I am surprised that this has not had more response. I have come back to it several times. I recognize that this is not meant to be a fluffy piece and it is because it slightly horrifies me that I continue to re-read it. If that is what you were going for when you wrote it, great job.

    Personally, I like to read stories about a Dominant Grissom. It is not easy to find D/s stories that are het. I like to see Gil with Sara or Lady Heather. What I don't like are stories that bash anyone else in the series. A lot of LH fiction tears Sara to pieces and that can detract from the story. I don't feel you did that as much in this story as I have seen in others.

    I am also someone who would like to see a sequel to this story.
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  • From ANON - Malenkaya on December 20, 2004
    Hmm. You've gotten a lot of bad reviews for this, lol. Honeslty, I think it was quite good. The things the characters did and said were at times out of character, but you absolutely nailed a couple of the character traits they have; Grissom's need to have control over a situation, and Sara's drawing into herself was entirely in character. I think this was an interesting, though somewhat unrealistic writing that gave a different look to any pairing between the two, and kudos for actually posting something well-written and different than the other hundreds of S/G fics out there.
    I think it would be interesting if you would write a sequel where they actually talk and discuss what's happened in this chapter; not S/G necessarily, but just something to give the story some closure.
    If you do, please contact me and let me know. LOL :)
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  • From ANON - Caitie on October 15, 2004
    I've read this at The Body Farm as well and shamefully never sent feedback. (I'm really lame about sending meta when there's not some sort of form.) I agree that the piece seems OOC, but I've also read some of your other LH/Grissom fanfiction, and I find your Sara and Grissom to be generally troublesome. I'd almost say it's a symptom in a lot of GCR and LH/G that I read (I like all of the ships, and I'm not dedicated to any in particular), and I am always deeply concerned about the portrayal of Sara and Grissom in relation to Sara. The relationship (or lack thereof) between Sara and Grissom has become such an intrinsic part of the show, and on some level, alternative shippers seem compelled to address S/G by portraying Sara Sidle as childish and immature and needy-- just generally lacking. Character Rape, I call it. And by portraying Grissom as infinitely impatient with her or as someone who dislikes her. While I respect that people dislike Sara, it grates on me when people let their personal preferences encroach on their integrity as writers and so such a diservice to Sara's character and her complicated relationship with Grissom. Grissom does not dislike Sara, and he respects her very much. Sara is a strong female character who has had a rough last season. She has her childish and needy moments, but to see them exaggerated and distorted for the sake of removing her as a possibility that gets in the way of an author's ship disturbs me deeply. The best GCR and LH/G and Grissom Slash IMHO are the stories that treat Sara'aracaracter with dignity and integrity rather than using the situation as an excuse to bash her character. (Or that don't treat her at all!)

    I understand that in effect, you may be trying to juxtapose Lady Heather (domination) with Sara (submission), but I think that's a ty aty analysis. Sara is not a submissive character.

    Anyway. My criticism is that I find it difficult to enjoy your work (which is well-written and a pleasure to read) because of your disturbing treatment of Sara, whin min my opinion is unfair.
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  • From ANON - Pallas on April 11, 2004
    Hi. Characterization is a wonderful, wonderful thing. Pity it's all wrong here.
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  • From ANON - Disgusted on April 11, 2004
    Not only horribly out of character and badly written, but an insult to rape victims everywhere. Great job.
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  • From ANON - --- on April 11, 2004
    There's OOC, then there's just horrible. This was the latter.
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