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Reviews for Tease

By : HoneyKCarpson
  • From Kernunnovladimyre on September 25, 2007
    Lordy, Lordy!!! That was among the hottest of all fiction stories I have read!

    I think you have s erious obligation to your readers to actually make this an uberly long story, with much well-written fucking!!!

    Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2007
    awwwww! That's so sweet. Especially where Ryan was all possesive.
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  • From ANON - dark angel on July 02, 2006
    you've so got to post back soon it wouldn't be fair if you didn't please post the next chaptr soon there so cool hehehehe
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on December 25, 2005
    ohh! very good! i like it a lot! please keep writing! now that Seth and Ryan know how they both feel i really want to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - science rocks on June 29, 2005
    well ya, this storry is a tottally coll and a hop that you wil updat sonn, will ya???
    becase i´m wating for it and i hopp that you will updat sonn, thankkss, seee yaa. hey areee you americaaan becase i´m from russia and i´m coll, my englis is godd, ne???
    see yaaa bueeee ;P
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  • From ANON - Erin on June 16, 2005
    Are there gonna be more chapters for this??? I hope so!!! Pretty please..... x
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  • From ANON - dark vampire on March 19, 2005
    eeep! so good! please write more soon!! yummy!!! i love you! *kisses* thank yoou thank you thank you! *huggles*
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  • From ANON - beloved on February 07, 2005
    really amused me - specially that last line - i could totally see ryan saying that!
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  • From ANON - YD on February 01, 2005
    Ryan...Seth X_X*nose bleed* More. NOW!
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  • From ANON - akitso on November 26, 2004
    Awsome!!! plz write more, i wanna know what happens next
    PLZ PLZ PLZ!!!!
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  • From ANON - Secret on September 08, 2004
    THAT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME! Longer chaps in future plz! When i read chap 4,I was like kick his ass Ryan! I was also like Seth u idoit! Then i rejoiced when he hit Aston (Haha Aston u got your ass semi-kicked!) In future when u do or if u do a sex part put LOTS AND LOTS of detail! We readers LUV that! UPDATE SOON! C WAI WAIT FOR MORE!
    Yours Truley and FOREVER!
    SECRET! Lolz
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  • From ANON - lemony on September 01, 2004
    VERY GOOD! EXCELLENT! deffinitly reccomended the only thing is that i hope i get too read anoter one linked to these four chapters!! :D:D:D
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  • From on August 04, 2004
    Yes, please write more! This is so hot!
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  • From ANON - Nemesis27 on July 02, 2004
    Yummy indeed. Loved it. Now how about some Ryan/Seth action. Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - spirit on June 25, 2004
    oh lord don't stop there!!! you're just getting to the good stuff!!!!
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