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Reviews for One Hot Night

By : dancingmoonshadows
  • From M0rbidFanta5y on June 18, 2007
    im dying in suspense here
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  • From Nizzemancer on February 22, 2007
    I see potential but it's not H.C Andersen or anything...Keep trying!
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  • From ANON - Chris on June 11, 2006
    These are paragraphs, not chapters. You've got the plot, but please don't post until you've got some action to give us.
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  • From ANON - Megs on January 30, 2006
    Hey i luv it plz update the chapter soon thanks great job
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  • From ANON - Tama-sama on October 28, 2005
    Hmmm, just not very good. Your explenations leave much to be desired, and the ooc-ness is really quite painful. Work a little harder on it, okay?
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  • From ANON - skittles on June 03, 2005
    ^%* #%^*^%*@%*^%*^# ^*^@%* @%^* #%^*^ @%* ^%*^%! please please please please oh please update!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - rachel on February 25, 2005
    you have got to write more i have to know what happens!
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  • From ANON - jimmie on January 08, 2005
    wrte longer pages
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  • From ANON - Anna on June 16, 2004
    Hi, been reading the chapters. Very good start. Fast but not too fast. The spelling is a little b, bu, but doesn't disrupt the flow too much. Miranda's internal dialogue is a little awkward, but still gets the ideas across. The tease of the two girls being so close to being "involved" is SO delicious!! Keep up the yummy work!! 5 stars!!!
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  • From ANON - beautybluegurl4eva on June 03, 2004
    So far so good.......... HURRY UP!
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  • From ANON - Mr.G on June 01, 2004
    it was good right more more plz

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  • From ANON - THE ONE on May 31, 2004
    you are doing very good keep it up

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  • From ANON - Anon on May 30, 2004
    this is good so far but plz write sum more soon
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  • From ANON - aj on May 26, 2004
    this seems interesting. but put more detail it seems a bit rushed
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