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Reviews for Last Chance

By : Hazeleyed
  • From ANON - Kris on September 29, 2004
    Oooo, great story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 27, 2004
    Chapter 11 was such a crazy chapter! Woot! Thats crazy how Gil forgot EVERYTHING of their time together. Interesting to see what'll happen next. ;o)
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  • From ANON - Anansay on September 27, 2004
    OH sweet jesus! Please tell me that will jog his memory into remembering, and they can get on with the "happily ever after' part of their romance!! Please!?! :)
    This is heartbreaking. Sara having to go on as a single mother when the FATHER is right there, and just not remembering... Okay, now I'm thinking maybe he'd never remember and just be an 'uncle'... but, of course, you'd never do that to us.
    Would you?
    Of COURSE not! lol!

    The suspence is killing. And you've done a fabulous job of creating it. I never thought this story would take this detour. Great job! *thumbs up*

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  • From ANON - NumbPrincess on September 27, 2004
    Yay, that was another great chap. I am so glad grissom knows now... Can't wait to see what happens next!!
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  • From ANON - brainfear on September 17, 2004
    Great story so far. No raunchie words describing their lovemaking. Like the 'p' word. Uhh. Post mor more soon!
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  • From ANON - numbprincess on September 16, 2004
    I love this story... I can't wait until you update again!!!! *waits impatiently* ;)
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  • From ANON - Nautica on September 15, 2004
    Woweee...Sarah pregnant...
    I am very anxious to read the rest. Hope you keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Zoe on September 13, 2004
    Ack! I love this story so damn much!
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  • From ANON - Anime on September 12, 2004
    Awesome fic! I hope to see more very, very soon.
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  • From ANON - LK on September 10, 2004
    Great update. I love the sneaky DNA on the toothbrush. Very creative. Can't wait to get this all resolved! Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Eve on September 10, 2004
    WOW!! I have been enjoying this up till now, eagerly awaiting this next chapter and you certainly didn't disappoint!!! Please Please post more soon!!! You can't leave it hanging there!!
    Eve

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  • From ANON - Janine on September 04, 2004
    I'm loving this story, it reads really well and is absolutely convincing, you've got the characters down perfectly. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Yolande on September 04, 2004
    Lovin this story, please please please update it soon.
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  • From ANON - Lady Mischief on September 01, 2004
    I really like your story. It is well thought out and has numerous twists similar to the actual show CSI. Are you going to kill Gris off? Are you going to write in a wedding? Is Sara pregnant yet? Will she even get pregnant? When the relationship comes out in the open what will be the teams reaction? I await the answers to these and many more questions so keep up the good work and update soon.

    Maggie
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  • From ANON - sam on August 25, 2004
    Damn! If it's not one thing, it'otheother. I like the fact that you kept the story going after they'd finally come clear on their emotions. And I'm still gonna stick with my first assessment-it's like a Dara Joy but with an actual plot. Please update soon.
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