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Reviews for Last Chance

By : Hazeleyed
  • From ANON - Ruinas on January 17, 2006
    I thought that the argument has non-sense and the script was the typical one of all those annoying fics where people just have continuous orgasms and then say "I love you, oh I love you so so so much". But that was at first. I've become absolutely addict to your fanfic, and I have not stopped reading it during these 4 last nights.
    I don't wanna act like a expert-in-stories-who-knows-all, because I'm not. But I want to say something that is true: you are very good at dialogues, at the action of writting what your characters do. Even if they could be out of character, or be placed on a bad script. You can make all that dissappear because you always know which is the perfect phrase to keep us speechless, the best comment of a character and the way for him to say it.

    You made very happy reading this, and I sincerely thank you. Please keep on writting! (Specially about C.S.I. Las Vegas ^^)
    (And forgive my bad English, I'm Spanish and I don't express myself fine in your language)

    Good luck and best wishes to you ^^
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  • From ANON - aemalie on January 15, 2006
    oooo... just a quick note that i loved this, congrats, keep it up!!
    good work, you made grissom come alive! the only suggestion id make would be to lengthen the few cath/warrick bits, they seem to stop abruptly to me, but the rest was amazing!!!
    good job!
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  • From ANON - moi on January 11, 2006
    great story noticed ur firfly references v. cool. u gonna do a sequel?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2006
    Very enjoyable story. Can't wait for your next story. You are great.
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  • From ANON - nekkochan on December 30, 2005
    Wow....
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    The sexual tension in the first few chapters was intense. I love how you bring out the reality of the discomfort that people feel when they are in the thrall of apparently unrequited love. And then the (pardon the pun) climax in the mountain cabin. That was a very creative way to bring Sara and Gil together, her saving him from a marraige-minded widow! I loved it. I'll have to read more!
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  • From ANON - Rachel on December 07, 2005
    Well, that was a long and wonderful story! You did a fabulous job and I was hooked the entire time - and it was a special treat for me that the daughter's name was Rachel, since that happens to be my name! Yay me! Great fic, I hope to see many, many more come - one-shot or novel length. Thanks so much!
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  • From ANON - Annie Hughes on November 13, 2005
    Just read some of your reviews in ansewr to the person who states no one has that much bad luck in a year my friend do not tempt fate I have had a major car crash (written off a 12 grand car) no one harmed. Had 2 close deaths and my house has nearly blown up, and had amajor op delayed and please remember that although Hazeleyes writes as a professiomal she also has a day job and slang can be misinterpeted from both sides of the atlantic. The verb or adjective "fuck is used in all languages and yes most folk would believe that the charactor of Grissom would say this. I found the story very beleivable and yes I do enjoy dialect in the tone of the person speaking and yes I agree that it would be hard for any other than a Scot to interpet that dialect in this instance it does not come into play as Hazeleyes has no Scot in her story. I do appeciate what you are saying about spell check but if you wish to be so purist spelling in UK and Amercia is different. This story is nothing short of fantastic and enjoyed by a whole lot of people from many different countries.

    Annie
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  • From ANON - Annie Hughes on November 13, 2005
    well what a story beats everything hands down girl. Love the introduction of new charactors. You are very very talented my friend. Love and luck always

    Anniexxx
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  • From ANON - anne ruhland on November 07, 2005
    Thanks for the long awaited last chapter. I loved it. and It was so nice to come back after a week with out a computer to find it done. It's like christmas in November. I love the baby's name too. thanks again, anne
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  • From ANON - Vicky on November 05, 2005
    Great story, I couldn't stop reading it until I finished it. Excellent Story!!!
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  • From ANON - Sina on November 05, 2005
    OMG...I love it!
    Finally!

    The name is so cute!
    Great job!
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  • From ANON - deb on November 03, 2005
    hi , had to write to say how much i enjoyed this story you are indeed a word smith , just to note ihave enjoyed all your work .
    I hope this finds you feeling better depression is a horrible illness ,i know i suffer myself and reading fics helps me so i do sincerly thank you
    best wishes deb
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  • From ANON - :] on November 03, 2005
    This was my first time reading a CSI fic and it was lovely. Good job. Rachels middle name is cute. hee!
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  • From ANON - ann73 on November 02, 2005
    Thank you so much for the adventure. Your writing is flawless and so very creative. I loved this story and can't wait to read more from you. Your characterizations are brilliant and fun - as was this piece.

    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Myshka23 on November 02, 2005
    Great last chapter. Loved it as always :)
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