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By : GrumpyWriter
  • From ANON - Jessie on August 05, 2004
    hey! u didnt update yet! itz prob. because this site was kinda of screwed up for a while.. o well.. i hope u can write some more sooN! bye!
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  • From ANON - SpRiNgEr on August 03, 2004
    that was great!! but i still like it better when chris is the one below wyatt~ i dunt kno y, chris is just soo much cuter when he is helpless and wyatt jus seems like he should be in control.. thats just mai opinion.. i still loved this chapter though!! i reviewd... so u nd the gremlins keep ur end of the deal and update more!!
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  • From ANON - janice on August 03, 2004
    awesome!!! chris and wyatt got a lil kinky~ hahaha..loved this chapter!! i sooooo cant wait to read more!! i reviewed, u write!! its wat we agreed rite???
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  • From ANON - kammy on August 03, 2004
    yay~ i can finally review!! well, im happy that chapter 2 was great, but im sad because u didnt write ne mor chapters!! and u didnt update ne of ur other 2 stories! ur r the best adultfanfiction writer ever!!! so write more!! ur stories r the only stories i read!!
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  • From ANON - xfaytx on August 03, 2004
    did u erase all ur hits?? i thought there were like 300.. hmm.. ne wayz.. wow, this chapter was jus.. wow.. hahaha.. do i even have to tell u i enjoyed it?? ill tell ya ne way.. i LOVED it! hahaha.. well, i love all ur writing~ i cant wait to read ur updates for this story and ur other 2 stories!!
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  • From ANON - Dominique on August 03, 2004
    im just curious, but are u a guy or girl?? i know, completely random.. jus curious~ haha.. but wow~ loved this chapter! it was long too! yay, thats a bonus!! the review thing wasnt workin when i read it so i kept waitin till it would work so i could review this chapter~ y didnt u update yet?? i guess u were waitin for some reviews.. but the review button wasnt workin so other ppl prob couldn't review either.. but we are all readin so write write write!!
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  • From ANON - ~*holly*~ on August 03, 2004
    wat happened to all ur hits?? there like all gone!! there were like 400!! wat happened??? y r they gone?? ne wayz, i read this chapter like a day or two ago, but couldn't review~ but this chapter was amzin! but thats no surp sin since everyhthing u write is amazin!!! u diupdaupdat yet?? i was hopin to find like 3 more chapters!! i guess u were busy, but i hope u find some time to write!!
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  • From ANON - ashlee on August 03, 2004
    this site was soo freakin frusteratin!1 first it woudnt let me on to the charemd page, then, it wouldnt let me review ur story!! but now it works so her i go.. that was a great chapter! ha! chirs finally got his revenge! that was realli hott! haha.. im reviewin so u have to be writing!! k? that was the deal rite??
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  • From ANON - kandy on August 03, 2004
    hey~ wats goin on with this site? i've been tryin to get on foreba but it kept comin up with some error thing!! it was drivin me crazy!! u didnt update yet!!! ahh!! i was realli hopin to read this story! wat happend tpo all ur hits?? there were like a couple hundred and now theres like only 2??
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  • From ANON - ashlee on July 28, 2004
    ahh!! ur kilin us readers!! u cant just write a begginin like that and not update!! hahaha... so please write more
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  • From ANON - jessie on July 28, 2004
    ahh!! y havent u updated this story yet?? its sooo goood!1 i want to read some more now!! sry if im impatient but it sounds sooo good! so write some more soon!! and make the next chapter realli long with lotz of sex!! hahaha~
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  • From ANON - HotFan on July 28, 2004
    Heyyyy, you are continuing it. YAY!!!! I like where the story's going and hopefully your next chapter will follow your note at the end...
    Keep up the good work!!!!
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  • From ANON - damon on July 25, 2004
    ahhh!! the suspense to find out wat happens next is killin me! so update soon please!
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  • From ANON - xfaytx on July 25, 2004
    ur such an amazin writer!!! that was the best ever!!! im just happy that u started the sequel to playtime!! i love all of ur stories, but i hab a feelin this one is gonna b a favorite! ^.^
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  • From ANON - a*v*a on July 25, 2004
    hey!! ur bak with a new story!! and not just any new story, itz a sequel to mai absolute favorite story!!! i could kiss u rite now~ hahaha.. that was an awesome start to the story!! cant wait till it gets more intimate!! all those s u s u had for the summary of the story made me know that im gonna love this story just as much or even more than playtime!! write more please!!
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