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By : GrumpyWriter
  • From ANON - janice on July 25, 2004
    yay! the first chapter was realli long!! i hope ur other chapters will b as long because i cant get enough!!! im addicted to ur stories!! hahaha.. maybe thats goin a lil too far, but the first chapter was amzing.. cant wait for ur future chapters to come!!
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  • From ANON - j.t on July 25, 2004
    wow! that was excellent!! im realli lookin forward to this story!! i realli realli realli liked playtime so im postive ill like this story 2! ur the best! keep updatin please!
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  • From ANON - kammy a.k.a ~*kam*~ on July 25, 2004
    that was greaaattt!!!! u r the best writer ever!!! u totally rule!!!verry nice start to this story!!! with a start like that, this story is gonna go farr!!! im lovin it!! cant wait till it gets sexual! than im gonna realli realli realli realli love it!!
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  • From ANON - Dominique on July 25, 2004
    yay!! u actually listened and made a sequel! i read the first sentence of the 1st chapter and i was already hooked!!! there wasnt even ne in in the first chapter and i luved it!! all i got to say is keep it comin!! more se!!se!!!!
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  • From ANON - Churio on July 25, 2004
    i was sooooo happy when i saw this story!!! a sequel to playtime!! YESSS!!!! no doubt in mai mind that this story is gonna rock!! i LOVED the first chapter and it didnt even have any sex or kink in it!! the rest of the story is gonna be fantastic!! i hope u keep story for a looonnnggg time!!
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  • From ANON - ~*holly*~ on July 25, 2004
    wonderful beggining! if this story is ne thing like ur other stories, im positive it wont dissapoint.. cant wait it starts to get diirrrtttyy!! hahaha
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  • From ANON - j.t on July 25, 2004
    that was an excellent start to this sequel!! couldn't ob done a betta job!! cant tell u how much im look forward to this story!! playtime was awesome, but i hab a feelin this one is gonna b betta!!!
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  • From ANON - SpRiNgEr on July 25, 2004
    omg! i am the happiest person EVER right now!!! u actually made a sequel!! YAY!!! the first chapter was absolutely fabulous!! if that was a preview to how the rest of the story is gonna b, than this story is gonna be the BEST EVER!! update soon please as possible!!!!!!!!! dunt leave us hangin!!!
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  • From ANON - findly on July 25, 2004
    i LOVE u!! i only read the first chapter and im already in love with this story! PLEASE dunt end this story ne time soon!!!! if this is ne thing like playtime, i can tell itz gonna be aweeesssooommmeee!! u totally rule!!
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  • From ANON - ashlee on July 25, 2004
    YESS!!! a sequel?!?!?! u r a GOD!! this story is gonna b amazing!! thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!! i loved the first chapter!!! i can tell this is gonna b as good or even better than playtime!! continue PLEASE!!!
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