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By : GrumpyWriter
  • From ANON - churio on September 02, 2004
    yay! u updated another chapter! wat tooke u so long?? ill forgive u becasue this chapter was so good!! loved the smut in it! hehe.. i thought that was the best part! oo chris was so cute!! and t wat was hott when he went into sex overdrive with chris~ haha.. i loved the kinkiness of it all.. a bound and vulnerable chris mxed with a sex driven wyatt.. very good ombo! haha~ so some time traveling to be expected?? cant wait!
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  • From ANON - ashlee on September 02, 2004
    yay! so some time travelin in the next chapter? that should make this interestin~ whew.. that was some scene in this chapter!! it was great! ahh! a bound chris being taken advantage of.. wow.. that was GREAT! haha.. it made him seem 10 times hotter! haha.. loved it.. write more of that kinky stuff!! .. i.. its the devil in me~ lookin forward to more kinky scenes and time travelin in the next chapter which i hope u write soon!
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  • From ANON - ~*holly*~ on September 02, 2004
    this was one of the best updates for this story so far!! i think it was because of the sex scene!! poor chris, but he loked so hott!!! i dunt kno y, but wyat on top of him like that jus made chris seem even hotter! ahha.. its the kinky side of me.. haha~ is there gonna b more stuff like that in the future chapters? if nadd add them in!! haha
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  • From ANON - xfaytx on September 02, 2004
    wow!!! that chapter was sooooo good!!! i loved it! that was soo worth the wait!! the chris/wyatt action was great!! i loved the way u made the situation.. kinky fun! hehe.. i hope u make more kinky sex scenes like that in future chapters!!
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  • From ANON - Eloise on August 27, 2004
    This is so good! Am I evil for wanting Chris and Wyatt to walk off into the sunset together hand in hand?
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  • From ANON - JessiE on August 25, 2004
    that was an awesome chapter! i realli enjoyed readin it! loved how u left us with a cliffy to keep us waitin and beggin for the next chapter~ jus wat u wanted to get lotz and lotz of reviews beggin for more rite?? haha.. guess itz workin cause here i am beggin for the next chapter!! hehewel.wel.. hmm.. next chapter.. hopin to see some more sex scenes, more kink, maybe so bdsm and N/C?? wyatt tryin to smack some sense into his lil cherub?? jus the way i would like to see it~ haha~ cant wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - kandy<3 on August 25, 2004
    hey! great update!! loved it~ wasnt a very kinky chapter though.. but it was still great! hope the next chapter has a lot more kink and sex.. because thats the way i like it!! haha.. wyatt punishin chris for goin away perhaps.. hmm.. jus an idea~
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  • From ANON - Churio on August 25, 2004
    wow! that was long!! yay! i love it when u write long chapters!!! especially when they are as good as this one!! i loved this chapter.. even though not alot of kinky action happened..which by the way im expectin in the future chapters.. but this was stilcellcellent.. waitin for ur next update!!
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  • From ANON - findly on August 25, 2004
    wow~ this is gettin so good! so now chris is startin to remember everything and is havin a new look at wyatt.. hmm.. i guessin wyatt isnt gonna like that.. how is he gonna try to get chris back now?? this could get kinky and very very very interestin.. ahh!! now i realli reallin reallli cant wait for more! get ur gremlins to start gettin u to write again!!!
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  • From ANON - janice on August 25, 2004
    ooohhh!! that was great! but u left us with a cliffy!! damn it!! i wanna read more!! ur stories are addictin!!! i jus cant get enough! more more more!!!
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  • From ANON - kammy on August 25, 2004
    so chris is finally realizing that wyatt isnt who he realli thinks he is.. hmm.. i forsee alot of conflict in the future btwn those two.. can wyatt smack some sense back into chris?? only one way to find out and thats for YOU to write! so get to it!!
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  • From ANON - SpRiNgEr on August 25, 2004
    this chapter was soooo great! loved it! one of ur bests! thios story is gettin sooooo good! im lovin every word of it!! i was gonna yell at ya for takin such a long time, but this chapter jus blew me away! so ill excuse u bcause of this great chapter! i hope ur gremlins are pushin u because i cant wait for more!
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  • From ANON - xfaytx on August 25, 2004
    ::applauses:: that was awesome!! as always!!! took a while for u to put it up though.. but ill forgive u since u gave us this wonderful chapter! and it was great! sois iis is startin to get second thoughtsut eut everything now.. hmm.. im sure wyatt wont like this.. do i sense trouble in parad? we? wel, hope u update sooner!!
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  • From ANON - ashlee on August 25, 2004
    that took a while, but it was soooo worth the wait!~ that has to be one of ur best chapters! godsh! this story jus gets betta and betta by each chapter!!! literally!! i hope the gremlins make u write faster bcasue im soo ready for more!
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  • From ANON - xfaytx on August 17, 2004
    amzing! im enjoyin this story sooo much!! its great!! i would say its my favorite, but all ur stories are my favorites! hahaha.. they are alls o good! ne wayz.. love where this is going!! so chris is gonna remeber.. wat effects could that cause.~
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