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Reviews for Allah's Will

By : goolecaptain
  • From ANON - Dark Child on October 01, 2005
    I hope ur title dusnt refer to Allah being behind the terrorist attacks cz im Muslim n the last thing i need is to hear ppl blame God for it! It wasnt Allahs act for 9/11 it was sum stupid terrorits who used Islam as an excuse for their stupid actions.
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  • From ANON - Nat on February 18, 2005
    That was stunningly written..cant say any more than that..

    hope you write more like that..
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  • From ANON - Jinx32 on December 02, 2004
    Interesting idea- Tru facing the horrors of a large scale attack. Two criticisms- 1) the show is set in NYC at least according to the old fox website for the show and two the lack of paragraph breaks made reading difficult.

    The ending in which Tru doesn't stop the attack was a good twist.

    Overall a promising story- it could do with a minor rewrite for readability and spelling.
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