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Reviews for Puppet (Rewrite)

By : GrumpyWriter

From ANON - baby on November 04, 2004
chris was just so freakin hott in this chapter! ur writing is just so detailed and has so much imagery which is great! i feel ur pain, i HATE work too! but i need the money so i have tp push myself to go~ but u wakin up so early every morning, gettin ready, writing this flawless story, and then returnin so late ... jeez, u realli are amazin! haha, update soon and ur other story too (present)
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From ANON - SpRiNgEr on November 04, 2004
another fabulous chapter as always! the first e bee being chris touchin himself in the shower immdiately drew me in! ouch, thats gotta b painful! i can see wyatt is gonna b verrrry creative in tortuin chris! and u put barbarus in this story? great move! does barbarus want melinda or chris? i guess ill read and find out! and wyatt watchin chris in the shower! the end was shockin! wyatt wants to have a chile with his cousin when he has a wife?! ne ways, i also wanted to say thank u or takin time of ur busy worlifelife to update!
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From ANON - ~*holly*~ on November 04, 2004
awww! u must b exhausted! i cant even wake up at 5! not to mention start writing a story and have it come out as great as urs!! u truly amaze me! hahaha... wyatt and melinda! wow, that was sudden! loved it! i wonder wat chris would say to that! haha, and also chris walkin in on wyatt and allison in bed! that was great to! i just felt so bad for chris in the shower scene! but it was still so incredibly hot!! barbarus!!! wat is he plannin to do with chris? that would b so kinky and great! cause we all kno how much we love it when chris is tied up and bein taken without permission, right?! ahh! tons of kink to come i hope! not to mention chris and wyatt still havnt gotten it on!!
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From ANON - ashlee on November 04, 2004
yes yes yes! im so glad u updated! but im not gonna complain about the long wait because it seems as though u have enough stress goin on! i appreciate the time u take of to write this story! and it is absolutely amazin, all of u writin is~ so propz to u for taking on a full tim job yet still being able to put up amsing stories!!! ahh! chris in the shower scene! he is just gettin more and more appealin to me! ohh, barbarus takin advantage of chris?! that would be awesome! great idea! will there b a wyatt chris scene in the next chapter?
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From ANON - Janice on November 04, 2004
omgomgomg!!! u updated this! i cant believe u finally did it!!! iE thE this story! that spell wyatt did on chris was sooo evil!! godsh, that must of been tortue for chris! and i cant melinda slept with wyatt too!! im glad u added barbarus into this story, i agree; it is a great idea! cant wait for more!
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From ANON - bayb on October 14, 2004
oh lalala! u finally decided to return huh? took u long enough! hehe, sry, didnt mean to give a hard time~ i just missed ur wrg sog sooo much! i think that made this chapter like a billion times better! i read it, read it again, then went back and read it again!! thats how much i loved it!! haha! the next chapter is gonna b soooo great! hmm.. my predictions :sex,sex,sex,sex,mayb some solo,possible tort, defin. some n/c, and lots of drama! sounds good to me!! lets see wat u write! no matter wat, im sure ill love it! hehe! also wrmoremore for ur other story, present! i've been waitin so patiently for that! reward me please!
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From ANON - fiN� � on October 14, 2004
ahhh!! im so mad!! i just wrote a HUGE paragraph reviewin this story and then my computer froze!! o well, ill just type up wat i remember again... so here it goes:
frist of all, I cant believe u finally came back!! i thought u had left us! but u wont ever do that, please say u wont! i am soooo unbelievably happy that u did a rewrite of this story! i thought the original was incredible, but this is 10 times better! i mean it has lust, incest, tort, sex, angst, drama, slash, n/c!! its just so amazing! mayb u could add some BDSM or kink in future chapters? just a suggestion, but I adore this story! im lookin forward to readin more in the VERY VERY VERY VERY near future.. k? and write more stories and update ur otehr stories, because they are ALL SO good!
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From ANON - kandy on October 14, 2004
omg! that was so awesomely written i could cry! i enjoyed it that much!! ur absence has realli sucked! dunt leave that long again without warning us! but ur forgiven because this re write is sooo great! satisified my craving! definetely great!! the end was such a cliffy though! ur teasing us for the next chapter arent u!! well u betta hurry, because im gettin anxious for more! o yeah, please update ur toehr story too! i;ve been dyin to read more of that too! especially because of where u left us!
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From ANON - SpRiNgEr on October 14, 2004
EEEEE!!!!! UR BACK!! FINALLY!!!! and u remade ur story! i have to tell you it is the best, like always!! its been torturous without ur stories to read!! seriously!! i've been checkin everyday, and u havnt updated! this story makes up for it because it was just so damn good! i mean, cousin on cousin then brother on brother! so much incest and sex! loved it! nd wyatt all over chris like that! aww chris cryin makes him look so cute and hot, and we all know it! he just looks so much hotter when taken forcfully! right?! hehe... update this AND you other story!! u cant leave usss hangin like that on ent!ent!!! its drivin me crazy!
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From ANON - ashlee on October 14, 2004
yipppeeee!!! ur back! i hope ur gonna stay for a VERRRRYYY long time this time! u owe us a lot of stories and chapters mister! this remake is the best remedy for not readin ur writing for like a whole month! did i mention how much i missed u? hahaha~ u packed so much into this first chapter, TWO sex scnece (which were the absolute best!!!) some n/c (makes chris like 1000 times hotter! he's jsut so cute helpless!!) and left us with a tease!! please comback and write more tothis story and soon!! and dunt forget ur other story present!!! u left us with THAT and dunt update for a month!!! that us cus cruel and unusual punishment! i've been dyin to read more of that so update please!!!!
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From ANON - ashlee on October 14, 2004
yipppeeee!!! ur back! i hope ur gonna stay for a VERRRRYYY long time this time! u owe us a lot of stories and chapters mister! this remake is the best remedy for not readin ur writing for like a whole month! did i mention how much i missed u? hahaha~ u packed so much into thisst cst chapter, TWO sex scnece (which were the absolute best!!!) some n/c (makes chris like 1000 times hotter! he's jsut so cute helpless!!) and left us with a tease!! please comback and write more tothis story and soon!! and dunt forget ur other story present!!! u left us with THAT and dunt update for a month!!! that is jus cruel and unusual punishment! i've been dyin to read more of that so update please!!!!
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From ANON - ~*holly*~ on October 14, 2004
this chapter tooootally rocked! tons of incest and sex with an added touch of drama, perfection! hahaha... wow, its been such a long time since u last wrote! this story totally made up for it! im so glad u did a rewrite! u added so much more drama and sex into it! the endin was so great! i wanna c wat chris is going to do! please update a loooot sooner this time! thank you!
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From ANON - xfaytx on October 14, 2004
i cant believe u updated! i thought u had left adultfanfictiot ort or sumtin!! im so glad u updated, especillay since u redid this story! the first one was great, the ise is excellent, superb!! i hab absolutely zero complaints about this chapter, it was PERFECT! everythin i wanted to read was there! i expecially loved the wyatt/chris scene! awww, poor chris! such torture! update soon (including ur other stories!!)
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From ANON - xfaytx on October 14, 2004
i cant believe u updated! i thought u had left adultfanfiction.net or sumtin!! im so glad u updated, especillay since u redid this story! the first one was great, the one is excellent, superb!! i hab absolutely zero complaints about this chapter, it was PERFECT! everythin i wanted to read was there! i expecially loved the wyatt/chris scene! awww, poor chris! such torture! update soon (including ur other stories!!)
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From ANON - janice on October 14, 2004
ahhh!!! wow! i thought u had died or sumtin! no updates for like a month! u were killin me!!! this story makes up for everything! i loved ur first puppet, but i REALLI REALLI REALLI REALLI TRULY LOVE this story! OMG! so much incest and lust!! and chris!! soooo hottt!!!! update update update!
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