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Reviews for Separate But Equal

By : pslim
  • From ANON - ruleroftravels on December 07, 2006
    You're such an accomplished writer!! this was incredibly perfect, in every way. i wish i could write as well as you. i love your work! ^^
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  • From ANON - sg1niner on June 15, 2005
    First, the critique. I'd mainly suggest a bit more dialogue, and using more paragraph breaks. A paragraph represents a single particular idea, and the huge blocky paragraphs make it a bit tough to read.

    That said, I'll have to say WOW!! Kick-ass scene, whew, I was feeling it. I was feeling it so much that in my glee I gave you a rating of Five, and it deserves it (that's one thing I base Ratings on: how I reacted to it, lol, and man, did I ever.)

    I especially like physical descriptions of Q, whew, cuz let's face it, he's fine. Q, his Human avatar John de Lancie, either one, fine by me, wink wink.
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