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Reviews for Nobody Loves You

By : cyndrarae
  • From HopelesslyEscaflowne on March 07, 2007
    Well, I liked the Brennan/Jesse portion of the fic while the rest I felt was just ok. You didn't really delve too much into their relationship, which is what I was hoping for more of. It's nice that you tackled such a serious addiction but it felt like there was barely any romance nor any basis for it. It would've been nice to know how they hooked up and stuff like that. There were some spelling and grammatical errors too but nothing overly major. Shalimar was a little creepy with how overprotective she was. Her relationship with Jesse seemed to be better plotted out than his with Brennan, which was sad. I would've liked less Shal and more Brennan/Jesse. It was nice to see her and Emma though, especially Emma. I can't stand Lexa so I'm glad she wasn't in there. Emma was more powerful anyways. I do hope you continue writing fanfiction and that you write more Brennan/Jesse fanfiction in the future.
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  • From ANON - myob ty on February 23, 2005
    well this one is good to just like the last one. a bit longer even though there are less chapters not as great as the last one because in the last one i felt more emotions this one is nice but i didn't feel much of the love. keep up the good work i mean it
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  • From ANON - Roe on May 10, 2004
    *sighs happily* Beautiful and very sweet way to end things. Or is it the end?
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  • From ANON - shal on July 12, 2003
    Great story.. spanking is quite justified and totally hot! Loved it lots:)
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