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  • From ANON - neonex on February 05, 2005
    I don't have trouble following your story and I hope you continue with it.
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  • From ANON - neonex on February 05, 2005
    When are you going to update? I'm happy Luka finally realized his feelings for Carter. I can't wait ti find out what John will do now.
    Neo
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  • From ANON - Lucky on February 03, 2005
    Hi guys! I'm the author of this story. I'm truly sorry if I should have any misspellings and grammatical errors. =( But English isn't my native language. So it's difficult for me to translate the story. I always do read the chapters again before posting them, but sometimes I just don't know that I have misspellings. As I already said, we do not speak English over here. But if my story is too difficult to read, just let me know. Then I have to think about something else... Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Voice on February 03, 2005
    I like your story, but I got to give you some critics:

    * Carter and Kovac are very uncharacteristic. I don't know if that's on purpose, but think about it.
    * Check your spelling and put dots after your sentences. To read misspellings and such in a fanfic can be very annoying. You don't have many misspellings, but I know that it could be better if you read through the text once more before posting.

    Otherwise, just keep going. The world is in need for some Luter-fics!
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  • From ANON - K.C. on February 02, 2005
    Awesome chapter. I'm glad Luka finally realized his feelings for John. Are they going to get back together? If they do will Luka be prouder or nicer to John? He better be. I feel bad for Samuel, but if John's in love with Luka and he loves him back, they should get back together. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Becca on January 31, 2005
    I am glad John found a nicer guy. Luka needs to stop being an ass and needs to sort out how he really feels. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - K.C. on January 30, 2005
    I cannot wait for you to update again. I'm also glad that Carter is not so flamboyantly gay, because it just makes him sound too girly. I like Samuel a lot better. Luka needs too grow up and decide what he wants. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - neonex on January 30, 2005
    Thanks for updating. I really liked this chapter. Even though I am totally for Carter/Kovac pairings, in this fic, i totally like Samual better. At least so far. He's a lot nicer than Luka, but if you are planning on this being a Kovac/Carter fic...I would still like it. Please update again soon. I don't think I can wait to see what happens.
    Neo
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  • From ANON - neonex on January 28, 2005
    Please update soon. I can't wait to read what happens. Hopefully Luka will come to his senses.
    neo
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  • From ANON - Becca on January 28, 2005
    When are you going to update? Please do it soon. I hope Carter doesn't die. Luka is being such a dick! Carter deserves better. Anyway, please post another chapter soon.


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  • From ANON - K.C. on January 26, 2005
    When are you going to update? Just one piece of advice, if I were you, I wouldn't make Carter sound so prissy. It is kind of sterotypical. I know a lot of gay men and most of them do not act that way. But, I do like the fic, so please update again soon.
    K.C.
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  • From ANON - neonex on January 18, 2005
    Thank you for updating. I hope you add another chapter soon. I think Carter and Kovac are so hot together. Please do not take too long updating, I cannot wait to see where this is going. Keep up the great work.
    Neo
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  • From ANON - neonex on January 15, 2005
    Man. Luka is an ass. I hope he realizes how great Carter is and not just for the sex. Please update as soon as y can. I can't wait to find out what happens.
    neo
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  • From ANON - neonex on January 14, 2005
    AHHH! When are you going to update. I cannot wait to read more! I really eant to find out where you are going with this fic. Please update soon.
    Neo
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  • From ANON - neonex on January 10, 2005
    They are so hot together! Please update again soon.
    neo
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