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Reviews for Martin and Harry's first time.

By : justin1234
  • From ANON - Travis on October 12, 2006
    Hey everyone,

    I haven't logged in here for a while. Thanks so much for your updates bbear, I could only skim them right now, they are too hot and ummm arousing. But I can tell you are a good writer and in sync with my first chapter.

    Sorry for being so neglectful in writing my updates, but bbear truly came through.

    Thanks so much for all the kind words, it really means a lot to me! I HAVE to write another chapter. Loyal readers and authors like you all make it so worthwhile. :-)


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  • From ANON - Anon on October 01, 2006
    damn..........that was awesome i need more soon please!!!
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  • From ANON - mark on September 30, 2006
    Chapter 3, first Simon/Martin then Simon/Harry, is so hot I bet it gives every guy a instant boner and a fanastic cum!
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  • From ANON - enonymous on September 14, 2006
    omgosh thank you ive been waiting for an update to this story for forever.. it was soo hott.. please write more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 01, 2006
    After Martin plows Simon, please have Harry making love with Simon. I think Martin's whole baseball team would love a crack at Simon's ass.
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  • From ANON - cougar on August 27, 2006
    Thanks for writing a sequel chapter! Simon's sure a horny fucker isn't he? Don't know why he bothers wearing clothes. Please write more some more chapters about Simon's sexual romps. Simon/Harry would be great.
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  • From ANON - cakid on August 26, 2006
    OMG, chapter 2 was hot! I always knew Simon would be a great fucker. Can't wait for chapter 3 to read how Martin shows his stamina built from years of training as he drills long and hard into Simon's tight tunnel. Bet he also chooses to fuck Simon so he can see his cute face as their second love session begins. Martin will still be hard when he cums and pulls out of Simon's ass so he moves higher on the bed til his boner touches Simon's lips. Simon kisses it then his tongue laps at Martin's cockhead performing with such skill that Martin's realizes Simon's done this before, many times, but Martin's never been sucked after fucking someone.

    Can't wait for Simon to be sandwiched between Martin and his friend.

    Kevin probably will surprise Simon late one night by handcuffing to his bed frame before exploring his body, making sure he's check every inch, especially his mouth, cock, and ass. Yep, everyone who see Simon, wants to fuck him!
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  • From ANON - mark on August 06, 2006
    I wanna see Martin/Simon making love! Simon's such a stud who can resist him. Why is it that everyone who meets him wants to fuck him!
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  • From ANON - Vicky on November 27, 2005
    Martin and Harry's first time was so hot! Is there a second time? Wish there is!
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  • From ANON - kilroy on November 22, 2005
    F*cking love it! I think next time Simon visits home, Martin should confess he only slept with that girl, Sandy, that he got pregnant was to make Simon jealous, but now his life was ruined. Simon starts to comfort Martin, carressing him at first then kissing him. Martin pleads with him to make love so his life will still have some meaning. Simon's stunned, could Martin be considering suicide over him, Simon Camden. Simon doesn't resist as Martin slowly strips Simon of his clothes. Martin's more muscular body is soon revealed as well and both tongues and cocks start to duel.

    Another weekend visit, Harry stops by to say goodbye. He's now 18 and children's services have kicked him out of the group home to fend for himself. The Camdens, except for Simon, are away on some bible study. Simon invites Harry into the Camden living room to talk. Harry asks Simon for drink. Simon grabs a couple of cokes, and while his back is turned Harry slips three viagra pills and a roofie into Simon's coke and swirls it a bit. Harry confesses to Simon that he never loved Ruthie, but just wanted to get closer to Simon. Harry starts to unbutton Simon's shirt and carress his chest and tease his nipples. Harry takes his time, wanting Simon to be the aggressor which after only 30 minutes his raging boner would ensure.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on November 08, 2005
    dude! i freakin loved this story! you need to write more !! do simon/martin! or kevin/martin!! i dont even care i just want more!
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  • From justin1234 on October 30, 2005
    I'm the author of this story. Thanks for all your nice words and for reading it. I enjoyed writing it and love to hear feedback. Please email me anytime with suggestions or recommendations.

    I am working on the sequel now and will post it as soon as I can.

    Thanks again!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 21, 2005
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  • From ANON - anonymous on October 20, 2005
    ive been waiting for the next chapter dude ! what happend !!
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  • From ANON - Lisa on September 01, 2005
    OMG please write moree!!!
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