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Reviews for Martin and Harry's first time.

By : justin1234
  • From jessmeeandshawn on October 05, 2008
    it's good,but you should include kevin and matt in the scenes now
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 30, 2007
    Another chapter well done,personally i would have stuck with the nown characters, but this is good.
    Hope jou update soon.
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  • From justin1234 on July 21, 2007
    Hey Everyone,

    Chapter 6 is up! "Baseball Team Gangbang"

    Hope you like it, please keep the reviews and suggestions coming. bbear and I really like to hear your feedback and want to see what you'd like to see in future chapters.

    Thanks for reading, hope everyone's having a great summer.

    Travis
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  • From ANON - JD on June 28, 2007
    This truly s one of the hottest stories i read.
    Me i suggest trowing kevin and peter in the mix for the next chapter that wil hopefully be published soon.

    A loyal reader
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  • From pettrum on June 24, 2007
    I like the ides of a ruthie tag-team chapter.
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  • From cakid on May 19, 2007
    Simon used to look at at Robbie pretty intensely at times, and the way they used to always get into little pointless arguments and shit? It was almost like flirting. It's time they both let loose and let them emotions free along with their raging boners. How about Robbie arriving for a short visit with the Camdens. Robbie, alone with Simon, shares a joint with Simon in the Camden living room and their emotions are no longer held in check. Another scenario would be Simon passing Robbie's room late at night. He sees Robbie covered in a sheet and remembers Robbie told him once that he always sleeps nude. Now Simon can't resist looking, then touching, then jerking and sucking Robbie all the while that Robbie's asleep!

    The gang bang of Simon would be awesome as you know he loves boys and their cocks. Everyone on Martin's team would be hot and horny once they see Simon's pretty pouty lips and get hard leaky boners at just the thought of his lips approaching their hungry dicks. I love to see Simon tied up in the school gym as the team explores Simon's ass, cock, and mouth! Some creative use of a Nautilus machine and bungee cords might be called for.

    More Aaron Carter (Harry) is always appreciated for AC and DG would make great lovers as they're both cute and sexy and so very hot!

    Regardless of what's in store for future chapters, thanks for writing a hot story!
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  • From bbear on May 14, 2007
    OMG THIS STORY IS SOOO HOT!! there should totally be a baseball team orgy chapter! id also love to see Robby come back to drill Simons tight hole, and Matt too!! i cant wait to see Kevin get his hands on Simon, maybe have Kevins studly brother Ben come and they can tagteam Simon! And more Harry in the future! Aaron Carter is soo hot! This story has such great potential, there are so many possible pairings it could go on forever!! I love it!! keep up the good work gents!
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  • From theoneandonlyslayers on March 29, 2007
    Kevin and Simon! Or Matt and Simon! Anything with Simon with a more well-known character.
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  • From bbear on March 21, 2007
    ok chapter 4 is up. I don't know when 5 will be up, nor do I know if it will be me or travis who writes it. It certainly won't be up any time soon, so get your fills of this one ;-)

    Some ideas for future chapters, please comment on the ones you'd like to see in the future:

    -Baseball Team Gangbang (obvs with some OC characters)
    -Ruthie tagteam with all the boys
    -Kevin/Simon or Kevin/all the guys
    -Story with Wilson (Mary's Ex)
    -Story with Robbie (ANOTHER Mary Ex)
    -Story with Chandler (Asst. Minister)
    -Story with Peter (Ruthie's Ex)

    Anything other ideas or more in-depth scenarios are always welcome, we'd be nowhere without the fans! Please R&R!!
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  • From ANON - kyle on December 25, 2006
    Simon gets gang banged and loves it! Mac gets his ass. Martin his mouth. Harry his cock. Peter his left nipple. His right nipple's still available!
    Loved every chapter. You're both great writers. It's hot and sexy!
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  • From ANON - kyle on December 23, 2006
    Love the basketball game idea. Martin and Mac oughta tie Simon to the basketball pole NAKED. The line of visitors includes Ruthie's ex, Peter.
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  • From ANON - kilroy on December 22, 2006
    I'd love to have a videotape, hell, even the audio would be great, of Simon getting fucked by Martin and Harry. Great chapter. I loved picturing Martin's balls slapping against Simon's ass as he fucked him. Can't wait for Mac to meet Simon. Those three oughta play strip basketball. Love to see each of them in various stages of undress, eventually their hard cocks bouncing up and down the court of the backyard of the PK's house. They could either do a daisychain suck or Simon could be sandwiched between Martin and Mac. All in the open where Kevin, in his garage apartment, is taping it all while jerking off himself. Then in walks Harry...
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  • From ANON - cakid on November 19, 2006
    I loved chapter 3. Hot!!!! Simon and Harry make a great couple. The fact Harry was fucking Ruthie and now screwed with Simon didn't surprise me for I always thought he didn't care how he got his rocks off. Simon's sure having a hot weekend, can hardly wait for Martin and Mac to get together with Simon. Sorta thinking Mac's even more of a marathon fucker than Martin is and once he meets Simon, Mac's gonna drill his cock into Simon's Tunnel of Love with gusto. Both Martin and Mac would love to see Simon get gang banged by the entire baseball team with Simon's mouth, cock, ass, and nips serviced by 5 players at once. The PK would go wild! Love to see Simon start having sex in more public places, after all, who would object to see Simon's sexy body in action/
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  • From ANON - Travis on October 17, 2006
    bbear, I sent you 2 emails, let me know if you need me to re-send. Want to talk about collaborating on future updates. I started chapter 4 where you left off. Simon, Harry, Martin and Mac. This time I promise I will finish it soon and post it.

    I loved your chapters - really hot and in sync with Chapter 1.
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  • From ANON - bbear on October 16, 2006
    thanks for the kind words travis! and i gladly hand the story back over to you! again, i hope that it was alright for me to go in and add what i did. im glad u like it!
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