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Reviews for Smoldering Desires

By : msgrits
  • From ANON - kittycat on March 21, 2005
    Sorry, but those veggie foods have protein but not iron. There are plenty of itemns in the veggie kingdom that have iron in themm. Meat eaters need supplements just as much as vegetarians, and white meat has very little iron in it anyhow. Also, Gil Grissom, being a scientist, would not insist on meat because he would actually do research and find that it would not be necessary.

    See: http://www.andrews.edu/NUFS/Vegetarian%20Diets%20During%20Pregnancy.html

    Hopefully the reviewer thingy won't strip the url. If that doesn't show up, do a search on google for "vegetarian pregnancy" and look at all the links.

    Sorry for this, but I hate when people mistake cultural assumptions for science.
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  • From ANON - Denese on March 21, 2005
    Why are you torturing us? This is such a great story, can wait for the next chapter!
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  • From brainfear on March 17, 2005
    Awesome! This story gets better and better each time you post! More please!

    ch6
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  • From ANON - maria on March 14, 2005
    This was so sad! I hope this is not a sad ending type fic because I don't do sad fic well! You will post a warning if it is right?? Your writing has really matured, I like that! You are one of the queens of angst. I like your take on the perptetually emotionally unavailable Grissom.
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  • From ANON - kittycat on March 14, 2005
    I like this!!! MOre, more!
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  • From ANON - LucyGrissom on March 11, 2005
    This story is so sad! :( You are a wonderful writer, I enjoy all your fics! And we can all use some dark stories like this now and then.
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  • From ANON - brainfear on March 10, 2005
    Great chapter.

    ch4
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  • From ANON - Solaris_Snape on March 09, 2005
    awww this is getting a little sad but very good......
    i'll be sad to see him go but perhaps he'll be a little better off not in pain....

    so...is she pregnant ? lol i'd write it that way lol

    UPDATE!! Please!!
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  • From ANON - brainfear on March 07, 2005
    nice one! more please.


    ch3
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  • From ANON - phebe on March 02, 2005
    Very good. she's a wanton hussy. Haha. More please.

    03/02/05
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  • From ANON - ferndavant on March 02, 2005
    Holy...Shit...NIIIICE. Beyond nice. KINKY! Amazing. MORE MORE MORE MORE!
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  • From ANON - ST-FLEUR on March 02, 2005
    Hello,

    your story is a succession of sensual scenes which wakes up passion and desire. I just love it love it love it when Grissom talks and thinks dirty ! LOL
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