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Reviews for Boy's Night In

By : kaeokekai
  • From ANON - NR on April 20, 2005
    Hi,

    If you are wondering whether or not you wanna read this, don't think; READ THIS. There are a lot of hot descriptions in here, and that combined with already hot characters and hot situations, creates an overall very hot story. Only one thing wrong; some of the grammar, like periods are bad.
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  • From ANON - Lo on April 20, 2005
    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - lucas is hot on April 17, 2005
    this is amazing plaes ud soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 13, 2005
    i love your story

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  • From ANON - pyke on April 11, 2005
    mmmmmmmmmhm pretty pretty getting horny, maybe a DP soon please
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  • From ANON - Ren on April 06, 2005
    Great Job. Just a little short. Longer? Its good so far, just makes me wish you had written more.
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  • From ANON - lybb on April 04, 2005
    i love this
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  • From ANON - Casey on April 01, 2005
    please right more!!!! CMM is so sexy!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - luleluva on April 01, 2005
    OMG!! THis was such a hot fic, pleaz post the next chapter, i blew an extremely nice load while reading this dude
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  • From ANON - Seth Walker on April 01, 2005
    VERY GOOD STORY, CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER, HOPE TO SEE FELIX... YUMMY
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  • From ANON - antarianprincess85 on March 31, 2005
    This is an awesome story! I love it so much. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 31, 2005
    That was great please please please update soon.
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  • From kaeokekai on March 30, 2005
    Jake;
    I normally wont take objection to a bad review because it is a persons opinion but I do take objection to your implication that I would copy or steal from a fellow writer. Do you realize how many fics on the site alone have used the review equals update ploy. Though I respect Slayer (s)he (sorry not sure) was not the first and surely wont be the last to use that trick. I normally object to using this trick myself but felt that I wanted to improve my writing and thought a few knowledgable reviews would help me acheive that goal. Aside from that I didn't appreciate the statement about "his fic was deserving of 10 reviews but u gotta either make up ur own shit or stop writin."which to me implied that my fic was not deserving of ten reviews which once again is your opinion. The only reason why I want reviews is so that I can be a better writer which only stands to benefit all of you.
    Kaeo
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  • From ANON - kevin on March 30, 2005
    I think it's a great story. I say keep doing what you're doing
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  • From ANON - Jake on March 29, 2005
    dude u totally copied everything from the oneandonlyslayer kid. his fic was deserving of 10 reviews but u gotta either make up ur own shit or stop writin. the fic waz good but u know u stole that from that other dude. and especially the second chapter thing.

    - jake.
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