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Reviews for Something's in the Water

By : Sulla
  • From ffstoryman on October 01, 2007
    Has or will chapters 4 and beyond ever be posted? This series is excellent and there's nothing more disappointing than having a series end with a cliffhanger with no resolution.
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  • From asianscaper on January 20, 2007
    Oh my. What precious pron. Thank you for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 12, 2006
    so its been a while huh? you should DEFINITELY UPDATE ASAP!!!
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  • From ANON - OC Fanatic on February 02, 2006
    More!!!!! I love it, I love it!!! The Marissa and Summer pairing is great, as is the Ryan and Lindsay pairing. Can't wait for you to write more. So please, come out with more soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Sian on November 29, 2005
    so freaking hot :P. I'd look forward to Ryan and Marissa though
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  • From ANON - Appalled on May 26, 2005
    This is awful. The characters might as well be named Clarence, Amy, and Tom for all the connection they have to O.C. canon. Your sex scenes are ridiculously overdone, and the likelihood of a virgin reacting the way Lindsay did is pretty much nil. I'm sure the readers who liked this had one hand fingering their genitals all the way, so I guess if you want to be proud that you helped people masturbate, that's, um, something. NOT something I'd ever put on a resume, though, if I were you.
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  • From ANON - l\'etje on May 15, 2005
    keep going
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  • From ANON - ashley on May 13, 2005
    I AM A HUGE R/M FAN I AM SOOO WET RITE NOW..evn thogh it was r/l IF U DID THAT WITH R/M I THINK I WOULD PROBOLY ORGASM RIGHT HERE IN THE CHAIR!!!
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  • From ANON - kel on April 30, 2005
    Yes! I loved that first chapter - extremely hot!! Continue soon plz and bring on the girl on girl action - can't wait
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  • From ANON - Cayton on April 28, 2005
    Hey, great job! That story was really clear and well written. Kudos and continue!
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