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Reviews for Rory's Regular "Check-ups"

By : Oric13
  • From ANON - *A* on August 26, 2005
    *Nice* beginning. When can we expect more chapters to come?
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  • From ANON - Wow on August 18, 2005
    Wow. I hope you update this soon. it's really really hot. I was wondering, are you going to bring Lane into this little duo's group? Because that could be really interesting.
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  • From ANON - Jason on August 06, 2005
    I would love to see two more chapters of this story or one more chapter with more sexual moaning and groaning and more of Lorelai turning her daughter into a lil slut.
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  • From ANON - R on August 03, 2005
    Very, very, very hot. Please continue! And like another reviewer pointed out, something about mother/daughter just makes it more exciting then regular femslash. And it doesn't hurt that both the players are absolutely gorgeous.
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  • From ANON - E on August 02, 2005
    i'm sorry buti find that just plain gross.. mother and daughter? come ON!
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  • From ANON - StaceyLo on August 01, 2005
    Man what a great story! It's so well written in the style of the show too...really, just a fantastic job. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on July 06, 2005
    Interesting.
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  • From ANON - Anthony on June 22, 2005
    There's just something about a mother/daughter pairing that makes for great erotica, even moreso than regular femslash stories. It's definitely my favorite, especially when they're as hot as Lorelai and Rory. Keep going with this.

    About the ending, though...are we actually going to see Lane's reaction in the next chapter? Even if there's no Rory/Lane action (although we could sure use some of that around here ;D), it should be fun seeing Rory trying to explain her predicament.
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  • From ANON - Mrs Boyscout on June 17, 2005
    OMG. Wow! That was amazingly hot. I definitely think you should continue this fic. Why do I think that Rory is going to go on a lot more dates with Dean as a result of the bargain! You are an incredible writer and the smut, oh so good. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Monnie on June 13, 2005
    YES. Oh man, I've been waiting SO long for another one of these from you. In the next chapter (or the one after that, if you're planning on it!) I'd love to read about Rory going down on Lorelai. It's the fucking hottest thing EVER. Lauren Graham is a goddess, ooh god I'm hot for her. Keep writing, these are just fantastic. xx
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  • From ANON - Phenom1 on June 01, 2005
    Well... this story proves once againe that you are the king man(I have yet to find a story of yours that I don't like just keep up the good work and I'll be happy.
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