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Reviews for Dreams Come True

By : pinklilyrose
  • From ANON - Sarii on August 15, 2008
    k....
    so i liked the story... but there were a few things that bugged me...
    first of all.. it was hard to tell who was speaking
    also you switched tenses ALOT! wich made it a little hard to follow.
    you also missed a few things EX: tommy james oliver went to tommy steven oliver and then back again.
    all in all i enjoyed it.
    keep writing. :)
    -sarii
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  • From ANON - Phillip on June 25, 2006
    I loved your story. I really whis you would do a epolog (or how ever it's spelt) just to show how they are fairing a few years after the defeat of Mesagog.
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  • From ANON - tony on November 11, 2005
    hey great story please update soon

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  • From ANON - White Ranger Fan on October 15, 2005
    When are you going to finish??? The Story is really good so far
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  • From on August 01, 2005
    Good stuff update soon please
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  • From ANON - kas on July 23, 2005
    hey, I just read this story now. It's excellent. Please carry on.. I really want to know what happens next.

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  • From ANON - White Ranger on July 20, 2005
    I really enjoy Tommy Stories. I think this story is really good. Please finish it. I want to know what happens to Kim
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