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Reviews for The Lake

By : Syble
  • From ANON - Chris on June 20, 2006
    Very nice. Your descriptions are mouth-watering. Some sex, please.
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  • From ANON - Kana on November 27, 2005
    You are going to continue this,aren't you....?
    Yes, off course you are :) You have to!! I love this chapter, and would like to read some more chapters :)
    So, please, write further
    Hugs
    K
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  • From ANON - sg1niner on June 25, 2005
    Ooh baby, this is hot! Love that you clarified it's the REAL BG, lol! And picturing Starbuck and Apollo, rowr rowr. I have a few suggestions though: have someone beta read it, or look it over one more time. Couple of little things, like you used "be" instead of "he" at least once. It's "reveled" not "reviled" (quite a big difference in meaning!) And it's "accentuated." Just a few little things like that. All-in-all, though, I really enjoyed it. Would've given it a Five rating if not for the slight spelling and grammar errors.
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