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Reviews for The Mission

By : mythologylover23
  • From Shadow1290 on February 09, 2008
    The story seems good but I don't understand it. MORE SOON please so I CAN understand. Anyway a suggestion... put a space between the chapters please, it's hard to read.

    ~shadow
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  • From ANON - reb Riddle on November 18, 2006
    What was the all about? you have pricked my intrest ^__^ I REALLY hope you continue this
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  • From ANON - Tabee on July 25, 2006
    oh, I really wanna know what's going on!

    now, for some constructive critism (or however it's spelled)

    You switched POV a couple times, and I don't know about anyone else, but that confuses me when I'm reading. One minute it was narrative, the next it was from Jayne's POV, so you might want to work on that.

    The only other thing I had a big problem with was that you didn't have any paragraphs, it was one giant block, that's difficult for me to read, so that's more of a personal peeve than anything else.

    Please update!

    Tabee :)
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  • From ANON - lily on January 21, 2006
    You should certainly continue the story. I must admit that I'm hooked. Sometimes the perspective was a bit confusing, but nicely written.
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  • From ANON - David Rodriguez on January 06, 2006
    Okay i like it but where the hell is the sex, or whatever. This was labeled M/M slash Jayne/Simon. I saw the potental but there was nothing. um I loved what i read. I followed very well. I also thought that if there are other parts to this story the slash would have moved along very well. I saw the opening, but there was only one part. Dear Writer, FINISH THIS FIC NOW, I COMMAND YOU.
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  • From ANON - explosivefruit911 on December 12, 2005
    I love so please update soon!
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  • From ANON - My Reflection on September 27, 2005
    It's good. The paragraphing could be more, but I would like to see where this goes.

    Please, keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Zonya on August 17, 2005
    Very good start, please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Nishia on June 28, 2005
    Hmmmmm. Interesting. Can't wait to see where this is heading. I love Firefly slash and there's not enough of it about. *sighs* Simon and Jayne are just sooooooooooooooo perfect together.
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