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By : Lumpkin
  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2007
    Interesting.

    "...Gordo opened the door in a pair of sweatpants but had no shirt."

    And yet, "Lizzie THREW OFF HIS SHIRT and ran her hands down his muscular chest."

    Continuity, even in such an abysmal attempt at erotic writing, adds much needed credibility to stories.

    Apart from that: Get a dictionary, get a beta and get yourself laid before you try to write sex scenes.
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  • From ANON - fleur on December 31, 2005
    wOoT!! i loved this story it was amazing, it was so hot...so...so...hot
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  • From ANON - Edward Hyde on December 12, 2005
    I love it. However, why did you merely hint at the "help" that Lizzie first gave matt? You started the first chapter at the end of their first escapade and I would have very much liked to read it. You made up for it with all the other plots though. Very good.
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  • From ANON - Cashboy1993 on December 10, 2005
    Please update please please please please please please update or i'll have to kill my self
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2005
    wow
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  • From ANON - Great Story on August 12, 2005
    I loved that story, very good work.

    Hopefully you'll write more chapters soon. laterz
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  • From ANON - X2Z on August 09, 2005
    From begining to end I really like your story. I think you did a great job and I look forward to seeing more chapters added. The plot is a good design, the detail you give to the characters actions, clothing, and scenes is also great. Keep it up man.
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  • From ANON - BJ on August 04, 2005
    Very good story. For a while, I thought that it had disappeared. I cant wait for that last chapter. Keep at it!

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