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Reviews for In Blue

By : LynnFox
  • From Wander52 on October 23, 2007
    I so want a continuation of this story!!!!
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  • From SaraGrissom25 on July 06, 2007
    beatiful
    i think i would have cried if you had made sara the victm of sexual abuse...almost cried/threw up when the father was talking.

    great story
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  • From SaraGrissom25 on July 06, 2007
    just read the first chapter. intense...but you did a really good job. i could picture it, this could be an episode~! the characters are written well

    good job
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  • From ANON - Annie on February 01, 2006
    help continue this story so cruel of you to finish at the best bit

    lots of luck

    Annie
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  • From ANON - Butterfly_of_Darkness on January 08, 2006
    Lynn! Great story! Love it! You MUST... and when I say must, i mean it... MUST update soon! Wonderful story *wubs*

    -Kilala
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  • From ANON - nicola on January 07, 2006
    GOD DAMMIT IT WAS JUST GETTING TO THE GOOD STUFF!!!!
    please please update soon
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  • From ANON - Cincoflex on January 07, 2006
    You have a nice way of telling a not so nice story . . . And I'm glad to see that Sara has the strength to face up to the interrogation the way she did. It's a powerful piece of angst.
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  • From ANON - Andy on January 07, 2006
    Lynn! *sends praise*. Aw! They kissed! They diiiid it! *cheers and comes down to earth and raises an eyebrow*. Right. I love the way you put cuteness and anger and beauty in one chapter, without making it obvious or cheesy. I don't like cheesyness, I loved this. Keep it going... you've been writing well lately.

    Andz
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  • From ANON - antinickname on December 19, 2005
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue.. i like your writing style. you are doing well with the characters. i want more, dammit
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  • From ANON - committed on November 01, 2005
    I found the second chapter on Geekfiction but couldn't find the first chapter so I'm so glad you have posted your story on this site. I'm loving it so far. I felt the utter disgust at the little girls rape and death. Grissoms response to Sara's discussion on weddings was very amusing and just the way he would behave.Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Rebel Andy on October 31, 2005
    Aww, you did it again. It's so special, I love it. I mean, it was... not even flirty, in some way. Hm, I can't describe it, but I liked the dialogue and the chapter. :) Continue continue :)
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  • From ANON - ann73 on October 19, 2005
    Awesome and heartbreaking. Can't wait for more:)
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