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Reviews for Under the Sea

By : SandyJean
  • From homiesaywhattt on May 30, 2008
    Is it really too hard to write "at" and "and"?

    I want to read this, but seeing "@, &" makes me too mad.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 06, 2006
    OK first of no more @ sign, second thats not how the characters talk. You sound way to formal. Spinner messes up common phrases half the time, and now you having him talking all proper.
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  • From ANON - Feral's Revenge on June 20, 2006
    This is really really good and I wanna see more soon! I loved the supense, but I am suprised at the rate things progress, it is a bit unrealistic, but whatever. It also suprised me every guy seems gay; don't tell me NO ONE has ever noticed this? anyways, more soon please!!
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  • From ANON - dawntray1224 on January 22, 2006
    this was a really really really good story update update updat eu cant leave us all hangin like this
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  • From ANON - king for a day on January 05, 2006
    awww marco and sean is not as good as craige and marco. craige needs to come into the picture at one point. yay. nice work, love it
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  • From ANON - matt on December 27, 2005
    thats hot mayne JT can get involved and spice things up more update soon
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  • From ANON - coko on November 28, 2005
    rwar!!lets get kinky!!
    lol,please update soon!
    i luv this fic

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  • From ANON - ??? on November 27, 2005
    Thats awesome i really do enjoy the story and i sounds as if it only going to get better....keep running with it.
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  • From ANON - Random Reader on November 24, 2005
    You have a good start here - It would be a whole lot better if you didn't use the @ symbol instead of typing at. It's not that hard, it's only 2 letters!
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  • From ANON - Felipe on November 23, 2005
    Fantastic Story. =P

    I think Sean should be the mystery guy! Marco and Sean would be a cute couple, and least for this story. =)

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - D-Puppy on November 22, 2005
    I think Original Character or Sean. Craig's too prissy. Well bye! And I'm the oc vote! Yay...
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  • From ANON - coko on November 21, 2005
    oh my god!!!it's getting so good
    this needs to be updated so bad!
    please please please.i luv this storie

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  • From ANON - ??? on November 21, 2005
    like what you have added so far and its great but it seems to me that you already have the crush, mystery man, thing all worked out...it seems that it could be spinner he has a bit of a crush on then again if i had anything to say about it i think it should have to be....Craig
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  • From ANON - D-Puppy on November 18, 2005
    Maybe not Dylan since you even put, Marco's looking for something new. And No on Jimmy, Spinner's gotta hit him. But maybe you should add a character? Just a suggestion. And BRAVO on that stunning lesson. It was the right way to go. I enjoyed it. Well see you...Oh and maybe Craig or Sean.
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  • From ANON - John on November 18, 2005
    hey you should make the chapters longer!

    Anyway, NO DYLAN HELL NO TO DYLAN I HATE DYLAN BLEH! I want it to be sean or craig!
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