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Reviews for His Touch Burns

By : Brianneinlove
  • From ANON - Iruka_Yuywell(just not logged in) on January 26, 2006
    *sigh* THis is a beautiful piece. I tend to think Wash would be glad to know Zoe's being taken care of. I think after the events of "War Stories" he'd trust Mal that way. ^_^ Good Job
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  • From ANON - Headnut69 on November 25, 2005

    Hay I just read your fic it's great but one things wrong with it......IT'S NOT DONE!!!!! Please write more I got to know what Mal things of his night with Zoe and anything else you can thing of. PLEASE!!!! Thank you...... and I thought it was well done.
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  • From ANON - ItsaWash on November 19, 2005
    Hey! This is nice and shiny. We need more stuff written about Zoe after losing Wash. A good way to grieve, you know? I like how you put this, liked the voices of the characters. You do great work! Please do write the next chapter, and could you hurry up? I like this and want to see more. Keep flying!
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  • From ANON - Teran on November 15, 2005
    I agree with another reviewer that Zoe's accent isn't so, uh, deep. And I can't see her musing this much either. She's a complex character, but I don't see her having 'long' thoughts. They would be pretty brief. That said, this is pretty good. I'm interested in the end of Mal's thoughts so please continue.
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  • From ANON - Dragonz on November 10, 2005
    I didn't think that Zoe's accent was so thick. She speaks a little more normal that most. Really only Mal and Janye speak in that manner.
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  • From ANON - Malsgrrl on November 07, 2005
    Truly beatiful and touching. Please post again.

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  • From ItsaWash on November 03, 2005
    Nice way to honor Wash. I miss him too! Please write mor.
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