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Reviews for The Measure of a Jayne, Conclusion

By : ItsaWash
  • From ANON - meg on October 31, 2013
    Not perfect, but 95% of the way there, and, mmm, yes, definitely the damn-finest fanfic I've ever read. You've captured the characters and voices better than any other Jaylee story I've come across. There are occasional moments where it stumbles in plausibility (Jayne refusing to kiss her struck me as seeming out of character for this interpretation of him), and it was intensely annoying to have the two parts filed as separate stories instead of linked together as seamless chapters, but honestly, a lot would've had to go wrong with this story to dampen my enjoyment of it. Thank you, thank you for sharing-- and please, please, keep writing. If you ever have any WIPs you want to send along for proofing or critiques, feel free to let me know! I would take pleasure in reading (and red-penning) your work any day.
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  • From svega1974 on April 15, 2007
    My God! This is an incredibly sexy story that is one of the best I've read! Keep it up and I can't wait to read more stories.
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  • From Tinadoll on March 02, 2007
    WOW! That was amazing! And Hot. Jaylee is my all time fave!
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  • From ANON - shannon vega on September 25, 2006
    Wow. Talk about hot and wet and perfect.
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  • From ANON - chem chick on December 30, 2005
    This is the first Firefly fan fic I have read, an' I tell ya, it was gorram fantastic! I sure as hell hope you decide to write more, because you, my friend, kick much ass. Thanks for a great story!
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  • From SabineLaGrande on December 28, 2005
    Wow, this fic is really outstanding. Really hot, really in character, what more can a girl ask for?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2005
    Good stuff.
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  • From tallis on December 21, 2005
    you have a lovely way with language that makes every paragraph loaded with texture and depth, even if its a minor point in the story there's so much there which makes the payoff all the stronger. I love your work, please more please?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 10, 2005
    yummy
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  • From ItsaWash on November 27, 2005
    OOoo, I DO love you people! You made me feel all prouded up and glowy with your comments. I thank you for it.

    Glad you liked the "riding" comment, seemed to fit with the general cowboys in space Firefly goodness we all adore.

    And the georgia peach feedback, "best in months", well, you fair turned my head backwards with joy!

    Ertia, Love: So good to see ya in here! You made me remember to post the sequel to this, so yes, I did just now. Love you!
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  • From ANON - Ertia on November 20, 2005
    Hey, ItsaWash! Good to see you hiding out and posting over here, too! Yup, it's same old Ertia, stalking her favorite authors where-ever they may go. You plan to post The Pleasuring of Kaylee over here, too, yes?
    Because, I cannot get enough of your Jayne & Kaylee!
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  • From ANON - gar on November 19, 2005
    the tone and style of the story are as real and juicy as a georgia peach, but twice as delicious. best fic i've read in months.
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  • From ANON - Lor on November 08, 2005
    Great Fic! Loved it from beginning to end. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Ashnan on November 08, 2005
    "You’re the horse, I’m the rider. The only work you need to do is lay back and enjoy it, remember? You can ride next time." Oh yeah!

    I love it. I love Jayne/Kaylee. I love the smut. (But who doesn't love smut?)

    You wrote Jayne's personality really well.

    Great job!

    I'll be in my bunk! :)
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