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Reviews for The New Guy

By : Kingofbass40
  • From ANON - Annie on November 27, 2005
    hI sORRY TO SAY BUT CAN YOU WRITE THIS STORY AGAIN AS YOU HAVE DISJIONTED SOME OF THE CHAPTERS IT WAS HARD TO FOLLOW. i AM FEMAL HERTO BUT MY BROTHER IS MALE HOMO AND I TRY TO UNDERSTSND HIS WORLD WITHOUT GOING TO HIS CLUBS AND THIS IS MY ONLY WAY

    i LIKED YOUR MURDER STORY BUT FELT YOUR LOVE STORY ALTHOUGH GOOD NEEDED A LITTLE MORE COURTSHIP . A LOVE DECLARATION WITHIN A DAY OR TWO SEEMS A LITTLE UNREALISTIC JUST TWEAK AROUND A LIITTTLE WITH THE STORY AND i AM SURE IT WILL BE ONE OF THE BETTER LOVE /COMMING OUT STORIES.

    YOU BROKE MY HEART WHEN YOU DID NOT KILL OFF ECKLIE THAT CHARACTOR DESERVES TO DIE

    mUCH LUCK WITH YOUR WRITING

    ANNIE
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  • From ANON - Lila on November 21, 2005
    I am absolutely adoring this fic. But without the double spacings, it's really really hard to read. :( Usually, there's a rule that you're supposed to space everytime a different person talks. It really makes things easier to understand. ^_^ Just a suggestion. I love the fic though!
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