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Reviews for The Pleasuring of Kaylee, Parts 1-5, all here.

By : ItsaWash
  • From ANON - shannon vega on September 25, 2006
    More! Please, more! You captured every single character perfectly and I loved how Jayne traded Vera for Kaylee. That was priceless.
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  • From ANON - Saphirephoenix on December 28, 2005
    I haven't read the Measuring of Jayne yet, but now I plan to. Kudos to you for being able to write in Firefly speak! I look forward to more stories from you.
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  • From ANON - KallistoG on December 19, 2005
    I read "The Measure of Jayne" on some Firefly Forum and fell completely in love with your talent...not to mention being a huge Jayne-Kaylee fan. This is one of the best pieces of fanfiction I have ever read. It's seems to be so hard to get these things right. Giving plenty of description, not rushing things, describing appearance and emotions, making every other character (no matter how small a role he/she plays) completely true to the original (which you succeeded perfectly regarding Inara, Simon, Mal and Zoë...and any other character that may have been in your story but I have forgot about) and etc.

    I have read so many crappy fics featuring this pairing and I was reaching the end of my patience...but there you are to save my day ;) I am not a fan of too much graphic detail when it comes to sex...mostly because other "authors" tend to give the detail in a dirty somehow vulgar way that doesn't please me at all. It seems as if too many others write crappy fics with plain pornographic sexual scenes...while you write steamy erotica :) There is a large difference between the two even though many don't seem to get it. I personally liked 2 parts in particular, where you managed to write something extremely erotic and sexy without it being sex. A) The spongebathing in The Measure of Jayne, and B) Kaylee kissing Jayne and him eventually kissing her back after he gets knocked out in this fic.
    I'm not a fan of fluffiness either, (it's a wonder I like romances...I know) and I like stories that contain love and sex without being all sugar-coated and filled with sugarsweet words and dialogue. Yet the part where Kaylee is questioning Jayne and she asks when it was that he ever loved someone not related to him, and he looks at her and answers simply "Now"....wow, my heart skipped a beat :)

    I guess I am trying to say that I more than appreciate your writing (me and hundreds of others) and you truly have a rare gift. Keep your perfect senses for characters and storyline sharp...and I look forward to reading more of your work! ;)

    -Kallisto, a brand new fan.
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  • From WandererInGray on December 09, 2005
    *laughs* That was fantastic. You captured the tone of the situation really well.
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  • From ANON - Ashnan on November 29, 2005
    I really enjoyed this. I love a good Jaylee.
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