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Reviews for The Better Man

By : Ertia
  • From Debs on August 23, 2009
    Brilliant! one of my favourite scenes. I love the back story. A bloodied and tortured Mal is a very sexy sight.
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  • From blackink on February 12, 2006
    Only two?!??! It deserves so much more! Great story great writing. Keep it up hun I'd love another chapter....
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  • From ANON - ItsaWash on December 26, 2005
    OMG, Ertia! This is TASTY beyond belief! I love you, love your swai and shiny way with words. The Wash/Mal torture scene is imbedded in any browncoat's mind who has read it, and your fic here just...makes the branding so much more real for me. I wish Joss had you to show him how to REALLY film that scene. Thank you for this. It was soooo good. And the dust and sulfur caked love scene with Mal and Zoe was so pitiful at starting, then so sensual as she came to him...left me a bit verklempt. We're lucky to have you writing for us. Keep it up.

    -ItsaWash, your fan.
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  • From ANON - Teran on December 01, 2005
    I was a little worried when I reached the Mal kinda forces Zoe part, but somehow you recovered it and made it work. Very good job, even if I am a little weirded out by the possibility.
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