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Reviews for More Than Friends And Brothers

By : Dagmar
  • From BurningBlackRose on August 20, 2007
    Another amazing chapter! I really hope Jason's Dad mellows out about the whole sitch, and stops worrying so much about what people will say and allows himself to just care for Jason like he should.
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  • From BurningBlackRose on August 08, 2007
    Another amazing chapter! My heart was wrenching with Jason. I really do hope that Jason's Dad stops being an idiot and stops pushing Jason away...
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  • From BurningBlackRose on August 02, 2007
    There is nothing that I would like to see more than a new chapter on this fic. I've followed it since I discovered it. Oh how amazing the Tommy/Jason Pairing is. Makes me relax a bit, knowing there's never going to be any Kim or Kat interference.
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  • From ANON - blackwolf on June 16, 2007
    Dagmar--

    I've been following "More Than Friends And Brothers" since it started some time ago and have eagerly looked forward to each new installment, feeling that in general each piece was better than the last one. After reading the most recent update, "A Friend's Choice", I felt I finally had to WRITE a review instead of merely clicking the "rating" box.

    Absolutely fantastic. That's the bottom line. Your writing is so engaging, the story so layered and believable, that when I was reading the first half of the chapter I felt as tense and as tight-stomached as Jason and Tommy must have felt in the story, wondering how it would turn out. (I can't remember the last time I felt that way reading fiction--online or published!) The added wild card of Rocky's sacerdotal vocation was a brilliant (and brave) touch. Not only did it provide some necessary tension to the storyline, but you didn't take any extremist cheats either that so many authors would take in a situation like that. To continue to handle that particular element well will take a great deal of imagination and empathy blended with a healthy dose of reality... but by now I am certain you can handle that.

    From the beginning the story has been very well-written, with convincing psychology and authentic human emotion. You have managed that rare accomplishment, staying true to the two main characters' personalities while leading them in directions that MMPR of course never envisaged. In just about every other Jason/Tommy story I've ever happened across, by the time the story was over one or the other character had substantially changed to fit the stereotypical "dominant" or "submissive" personality... which is totally contrary to the dynamic we've always seen at work between Jason and Tommy. You have not fallen into that trap. You've balanced their personalities in the context of developing intimacy and affection, I think, absolutely perfectly, in a way that would almost HAVE to be the way that things would have worked out in "reality".

    Well, I've said enough, I think... Again, fantastic job, and please keep it up!

    --Blackwolf
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  • From ANON - Nicki on April 20, 2007
    I am loving this story. Tommy and Jason are so cute together it makes me so damn jealous!
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  • From Avian03 on April 16, 2007
    Good chapter.
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  • From RiekaDeVolka on March 19, 2007
    You're my god, really.

    I'm an old PR shipper, back from the days. I actually watched the series from the very beginning, when it first arrived in my country (Mexico), but until now - prompted by a weekend of babysitting brats who *only* watched PR - I began looking for fanfic. I must say the first time I surfed around here, I got scar(r)ed for life and vowed not to come back ever again. **shudders**

    Then I gathered the courage and mercifully stumbled - literally, don't ask - upong your story. I can't begin to explain how happy I was.

    Personally, I don't agree with the person who reviewed before me, saying that Tommy's 'shyness' to sex was OOC. I think it's very much in character, because this is *not* a 'normal' relationship. I really enjoy your take in their relationship, in all angles. The moments of insecurity, the fumbling to figure out things, the 'research'. I love all that, because it makes them feel *human* and *real*.

    Being bi myself, I can assure you many things you point out indeed happen when you first step 'out of the norm' and start a same-sex relationship. You managed to capture the essence of the insecurities, the rocky attempts to make things perfect, the disastrous results of not being yourself. More importantly, you've managed to capture the unfolding of a really strong relationship, one that's not based only on hormones and sex. You've managed to tie them together in a beautiful way, showing us why relationships aren't boring - because something *always* goes wrong/not the way you expected it.

    Tommy and Jason are OOC, though, but not the *wrong* kind of OOC. But this is good, you see, because you've set your fic in the future, well after Jason is last seen and after Tommy is 'done' with the Dino-rangers; this means they've grown, *changed*. They are different from their IC personalities seen in the show, but this is good, because it'd be sad (and *insulting*) to Jason's character that you wrote him like a teenager, ten years later! Yes, you've departed from canon but you *had* to and it's certainly the natural progression of a character. And quite frankly, you've managed to do so with impecable talent.

    Finally, to close up this rant (whoopsie, got a bit carried away), I look forward to see more of this fic, it's certainly something else. Best of luck with whatever you choose to write/do now and thank you for sharing this beautiful, touching, real love story.

    --Rieka

    Ps. Your long chapters are love, seriously.
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  • From ANON - Avian03 on December 29, 2006
    Good job yet agan.
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  • From ANON - Ree on December 22, 2006
    .....I love you. No seriously, this was AWESOME BEYOND AWESOME! *Bows down repeatedly and gives lots of cookies in thanks!* They FINALLY got it right! Oh my gosh, that chapter had me so enthralled that I completely ignored a friend of mine I was talking to over IM while I was reading. And YAY for Jason being on top! I dunno why, but I always liked the idea of him being seme. I guess that's just me though. But yayayayayayayayay!! A thousand times YAY! Please keep writing more! Thanks for the great chapter!
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  • From sheraven on December 14, 2006
    Many fics based on the Rangers often involve juvenile language and worse grammar. You obviously understand that misuse of punctuation or spelling can really ruin the reading of a story, so I thank you for not letting language get in the way of great story telling. I liked how you drew out each encounter, physical or emotional, and described juicy details. I'm not sure if Tommy's reluctance and sexual ignorance fits his character, but when you pair it with Jason's dominance, I love it. Very few people can write about domination well, as you can. Thank you, and please keep the pen to paper (or fingers to keyboards, as it were).
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  • From ANON - Mystik on November 22, 2006
    Wow.

    Just wow. *_________________*

    I loved it so fucking much! /o/

    Now I want to see Tommy giving Jase a massage! XD *run*

    =**
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  • From ANON - Avian03 on November 21, 2006
    Loved this chapter.
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  • From ANON - Mystik on November 16, 2006
    OMG!

    You are a very bad person, you know that? How could you stop there? lol

    I'm salivating here, please, post the next chapter! *on her knees*
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  • From ANON - Ree on November 14, 2006
    Oh that was amazing! Usually the Tommy/Jason fics I come across are all angst-filled and depressing, but this one was hot, sweet, and EVERYTHING that is Tommy and Jason. *Huggles them both* But you left us dangling right at the most crucial time! ACK! I have to admit though, their first time going "all the way" was adorable and it made me giggle. That happens more often than not in any relationship. Anyway, please update soon and thanks for the great fic!
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  • From ANON - Avian03 on November 12, 2006
    That hot. more soon.
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