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Reviews for Operation Disguise

By : Lursa
  • From ANON - BeTor on October 15, 2006
    Ahhh confession time. You guys did catch me on a couple of things. I'm writing Clex alone so you're seeing more of my weak spots as a writer then you did when I was writing Andromeda with Lursa. We have different weak spots so we compensated well for each other as co-writers. Lursa is great at endings. I'm not so good at them. Lursa casts a stern eye on editorial matters, but I tend to play more fast and loose with editing. Writing is a skill that one develops by doing so my writing will always improve, but it will never be perfect. All any writer can do is to strive for excellence as well as her current skills allow. I'll try to do better with editorial matters on my next story. The only way to improve my skills at endings, and my other writerly weaknesses, is to keep trying and writing which I do intend to do. Hopefully my endings will improve with time. Thanks for your feed back. I hope to have a long clex for you before the end of the year; it's a sequel to everything.
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  • From ANON - Amelia on October 10, 2006
    O-M-F-G!-!-!O_o OMGOMGOMGOw...My....G-O-D!-!-!o_O ROTFLOL;-D!-!-! That was increadibly EXCELLENT Writing!-!-!^_^ But totally Evil to end it there;-P!!!(Not to mention the cutting short of the sex scene's;-p)It's enough to make a girl wanna scream in frustration (Which I actually did, so everyone in my house now KNoWs, -what they've probably long since Suspected- That I'm Utterly INSANE;-p Coz U see not only did U have me screaming my lungs out at the ending itself^_~ I was also -probably- (while reading UR masterpiece) making quite unintelligable sounds -trying to pass as silent mirth- & rarther loud -Not to Mention- Exponentionally Frequent: Giggles, Gasps, Squels& just plain-R-O-T-F-F-L-O-L-Laughter^_^!!!) But I must confess, the humiliation of utterly losing controle;-P Was WELL Worth it 4 the EXQUISITE Torture of reading UR WONDERFUL WORK;-D!!! So ALL I can really say= PLZZZ 4 all us (lazy-ass) fans out there (who-can't-hold-a-candel-to-UR-OVERWHELMING-Talent) PLZ, PLZZ, PLZZZ, PLZZZZ WRITE M-O-R-E!!!^_^ -gives U the *patented-pleading-puppy-eyed-Clark-look* ;-D!-!-!(In other words, I sincerely hope that U'll continue to explore UR OBVIOUS Talent^_^ Perhaps with some more CLex Fanfiction);-D *cough-SEQUEL-cough-Not-so-subtle-HINTHINT* XD -Furthermore gifts U with the- ^_^ *patented-U-Know-U-WANT-To-Lex-Sneer* ^_~ !-!-!
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  • From ANON - Jackie on September 15, 2006
    Highly enjoyale. Although the ending was somewhat dissapointing.. it just kind of trailed off and didn't 'end'. You have to make up your own endings really. Like, what about mitch. What about Chloe and Pete, what do they think about the whole Lex & Clark thing hm?
    Oh well. Other than that I really liked it. The 'moose' comment was just hilarious. And I do like the idea of Clark getting into 'ruts' XD

    OMG You should seriously write a sequal with Lex using his virus on Jar-El. Can't tell you how happy that would make me. He's so mean to my little Clarkinns.
    Keep on writing. You roxxors. XDD
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  • From ANON - VZG on August 16, 2006
    Very nice! I love the idea of Clark's sexuality being so different. I think you're missing a few words here and there, but overall, this almost seems too well-written for AdultFanfiction.net. X3;; (I'm sure I just offended someone... Sorry!) I was hooked from the first kiss.

    And ROFFLE to the idea of Batman doing his own laundry. XD
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